This is the turning point.

[travelsick]

Hirona now felt the rain. Again, it fell in portions. The constant tapping was a symphony, movements directing the downpour. She walked slowly nonetheless. She was startled out of her thoughts by the loud crash of a pipe organ. It slammed with fury inside a church. The moonlight reflected off the windows, the painted on gods shimmering. The rain

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[anonymous]

Hirona now felt the rain. Again, it fell in portions. The constant tapping was a symphony, movements directing the downpour. She walked slowly nonetheless. She was startled out of her thoughts by the loud crash of a pipe organ. It slammed with fury inside a church. The moonlight reflected off the windows, the painted on gods shimmering. The rain dropped slower now, but she quickened her pace.

are you aware of the semi-colon? it is a brilliant conception, device; I suggest you employ it; it'll be worth your while; your writing tastes like loose soil swallowed intermittently.

here is your writing, symbolically reconstructed in two sentences, you shameless egoist:
Who is my main character? (crash) It is a girl. (crash)

Word of advice: When you go swimming, don't breath under water, you'll choke. Just open your eyes. How old are you? I guarantee you're my senior by at least five years. If you're published our country has good reason to fight.
exeunt

insincerely,
-someone without your qualities

[accurately]

How can you guarantee that he is five years older than you?

Don't be so sure, soldier. But what if he is? Show us something you've written; prove that you are better.

-Accurately

[anonymitysmith]

Dear “Someone Without Your Qualities

[accurately]

That is exactly what I was thinking.

[borntofreeeeak]

why hello there. i'm not sure who you are and you put me on you friends list. so, just wondering who are you? and ermm... why am i on your friends list?

by the way, like the entries and your writting.

[hairy_man1]

Erm... who are you and why did you add me to your friends list?

[_hotpinkshoes_]

so i guess i'm just going to ask what everyone else has- which is- why did you put me on your friends list...but i'd assume it was so i, and the other people in my situation, would read your writting. so good job, because i did, as i'm sure we all did.

[aylara]

Please remove me from your friends list. Thank you.

[heather746]

who may this be on my friends list??