Comments | tonje90: Scream, Kid 1/2

tonje90

Scream, Kid 1/2

Oct 10, 2010 21:18

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rated nc-17, !author|artist: tonje90, lure, fan fiction

Comments 10

dpracket October 11 2010, 14:17:23 UTC

Great last line!

tonje90 October 11 2010, 17:08:14 UTC

Thank you! :)

hotlen October 11 2010, 15:45:24 UTC

I'm not usually one for smut, but I'm liking this bad ass dominant Reid. He's like ATWTs Reid but kicked up a notch.

tonje90 October 11 2010, 17:08:43 UTC

ATWT-Reid kicked up a notch was what I was going for. Thank you :)

ffffffffffffffuuuuuuuuuuuuuu...........wow afiriti_1 October 11 2010, 15:57:25 UTC

OMG Tonje!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you got me totally after first lines!! so hot, quickly second part please. I also like the length of chapter, i m so busy last days that its handy :))
the only criticism is there will be only two parts????? I love it!

Re: ffffffffffffffuuuuuuuuuuuuuu...........wow tonje90 October 11 2010, 17:09:30 UTC

Haha, thank you! I am currently working on a sequel, so there will be a bit more ;)

joann414 October 11 2010, 18:49:18 UTC

Glad you did post. almost made me scream.

tonje90 October 11 2010, 19:17:23 UTC

Haha, thanks x)

shar_jere October 13 2010, 14:50:49 UTC

OMG OMG....