Light & Dark Challenge; Sailing

[curiouswombat]

I sat down to write at least one more drabble following Sam as he sailed West. And somehow it began to gather the prompts together so that this includes all of them, even the two I've already done

Comments

[hhimring]

Goodness, all of them in a single drabble!
And if flows really well, with a great moment at the end!

[curiouswombat]

Thank you! I didn't set out to include them all, but somehow it just worked - and I'm really pleased that you think it flows well, too :)

[shirebound]

What a beautiful experience for Sam.

[curiouswombat]

Thank you - it took me ages to get the right picture in my mind - and then... it worked!

[silverstarspray]

Ohh, this is lovely! All the prompts work really well in it, and I love the image of the rainbow as the gateway to the straight road.

[curiouswombat]

Thank you! I'm so pleased you liked that image. I have been lost as to what to do with these for a couple of weeks - and then, once I had that image in my mind, it began to work.

[kortirion]

Very effective, and clever use of all the prompts without any of them feeling contrived! As himring said, it flows really well to just the "right" conclusion.

[curiouswombat]

Thank you - it kind of surprised me when I realised they were all fitting in!

[engarian]

Oh, my heart! LOVE this.

- Erulisse (one L)

[curiouswombat]

Thank you!