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FIC: Flipped, Book 3 (8/12)

Dec 31, 2015 10:01

Title: Flipped, Book 3
Rating: heavy T, with some M/MA
Author: tkel_paris
Summary: David Noble thought he had come to terms with the strange feelings the female Doctor inspired, and it seemed to be helped by Martha Jones joining them. But when the Aubertide threaten the Doctor, protecting her requires a cover that will test his sanity and his ability to find ( Read more... )

ficverse = flipped, wilf, bas_math_girl, torchwood team, rating = m, doctor/donna, geoffrey, doctor who, sylvia, cassikat, david noble, fanfic, ginger!ten, jack harkness, tardis-mole, fic!presents

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tardis_mole January 2 2016, 13:28:40 UTC

Erm, just so you know. I don't know when the US first had domestic freezers, but they weren't introduced into Britain until the early 1960s, and most people couldn't afford to buy one until at least a decade later. So, David saying that hie grandparents had one in the 1930's is completely out of the question ( ... )

tkel_paris January 3 2016, 19:04:26 UTC

Again, it's a pain having to write without being able to call on you as a beta. I'm going to have to stick with one-shots for a while until I'm more comfortable with research or with figuring out how to ask questions without giving anything anyway ( ... )

tardis_mole January 3 2016, 20:07:00 UTC

That is a problem.

*giggles* I dare you. :DDDD The Doctor telling Donna that he's going to MASS and her reaction. I'd have paid good money for that to have been on screen.

Sorry, that was supposed to say MOLES not males. But at least you realised that. *coughs*

He might have, but he didn't remember to the extent Donna is here. He dismissed than as dreams, but Donna isn't. That could be serious if the Aubertide find her.

Yeah. Even worse than Donna getting pregnant in The Nature Of Donna.

No problem. I'm more patient than my review would suggest. :DDD I will get to them in the next two days. Got some housework to get back to. Gah!

tkel_paris January 7 2016, 05:00:34 UTC

(LJ ate my comment! ARGH!)

Hazard of being an American, I guess.

Might work as a prompt for a Secret Santa fic I was supposed to write. :D But what does the second S stand for? ;)

Had one removed. As a teen.

But if Verity saw it in his book and noticed the resemblance to Rose Tyler... I see potential for a plot bunny.

Please be patient. Still have to work on two chapters. And ugh on the housework I still have to do. :(

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dm12 January 3 2016, 00:30:51 UTC

So... she got what she wanted. The question then becomes, how does this complicate things? The DNA of the child, is it human or does it have some TL DNA in it? Because if it has some Time Lord elements, they are really in trouble. The Aubertide will detect it and find them ( ... )

tkel_paris January 3 2016, 18:59:23 UTC

All good points. I only hope I addressed them all well enough. *nervous smile*

bas_math_girl January 4 2016, 22:49:36 UTC

[I thought you meant freezing leftovers when they had the chance to, and not wasting food during the 1930s generally rather than by freezing; so I apologise for getting you into trouble over that one. Sorry.]

And welcome to the family to you too, Sylvia! Has she had a politeness bypass operation or something? I hope David and Donna worked out their pent up anger by christening loads of places just to spite her.

And now to read the fallout from the big reveal.... :D

tkel_paris January 7 2016, 05:01:51 UTC

(It's okay. Maybe I should've asked more questions. Live and learn.)

Eh, you gotta wonder sometimes... Well, Donna might've. He was thinking of calming her down. ;)

Yep. :)