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tj_teejay

Off Into The Sunset - A Prison Break Double Drabble

Jan 18, 2009 11:28

Here's another double drabble I wrote for the pbhiatus_fic 2009 Hiatus Challenge.

( Off Into The Sunset )

fic: prison break, so. yeah. i write fan fiction., tv: prison break

Comments 12

linzi20 January 18 2009, 12:33:39 UTC

Ohh. LOVED THIS! *nods*

tj_teejay January 18 2009, 12:44:20 UTC

I'm glad you like it. And, man, you wouldn't believe how many times I had to start over in my head because men always crept back into the conversation. :-P

linzi20 January 18 2009, 13:05:45 UTC

I know! I've been thinking about mine, and I can't seem to come up with anything where men aren't mentioned. Sad innit? LOL.

I friended you btw. Hope you don't mind. I was really impressed with your fic!

tj_teejay January 18 2009, 13:14:40 UTC

I love Sara's character, and to me Michael is kinda omnipresent in her mind, no matter what season. I just couldn't bring myself to write a Gretchen/Sara story. I was first thinking about writing something that Sofia was in, but who would she talk to if not an OFC?

Thanks for friending me, of course I don't mind. I'm not too frequent a fanfic writer, though--and not half as eloquent as some of the wonderful folks in the PB fanfic realm. Right now I'm more obsessed with the Joan/Adam pairing from Joan of Arcadia. But this won't have been the last Prison Break story I've written, don't worry. :o)

wrldpossibility January 18 2009, 15:19:28 UTC

Oh this is great! I love reading about Sara and Katie. I'm not sure if they ever had a conversation that wasn't about Scofield, so this is a great scene!

tj_teejay January 18 2009, 19:43:23 UTC

Thanks. :o) Like I said before, somehow Michael always kept creeping back into the conversation as I wrote the fic in my head. But in the end, men-less conversation prevailed. LOL

alienmom January 18 2009, 16:04:10 UTC

Sex on the Beach?"

"No thanks."

Katie laughed again. "It wasn't an offer."

hehe!! too funny!! i could see katie saying this!

tj_teejay January 18 2009, 19:43:59 UTC

Yeah, me too. :o)

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tj_teejay January 18 2009, 19:45:53 UTC

I agree, Katie was a great character. Somehow I always wondered just how close Katie and Sara were. To me it always felt like they were what I would call work friends. You know, people you're close to at work but that you would rather keep out of your private life.

danni18 January 19 2009, 20:58:06 UTC

Liked how you used the setting from S1. Also liked how sara is so practical. And it was touching how she forgot sara couldn;t drink then remembered and felt bad

tj_teejay January 19 2009, 21:40:31 UTC

Thanks, I'm happy to please. I'd love to explore Sara's drinking problem more, but I mostly wanna write season 4 stuff. Kinda hard to go there when the guys have so many bigger things to worry about.