Aug 08, 2005 01:31
Okay I wrote this one when I was down in Gulf Shores this summer. Shelli was there! hehe. Yeah, I don't know how much I like the last 8 lines, so y'all let me know what y'all think!
Mother, do you notice?
Can you see what’s in my eyes?
Do you even care about
All the tears I cry?
I know sometimes you hate me.
You don’t like the things I do.
But I wish you could understand.
I never meant to hurt you.
Father, are you curious?
Are you interested in my life?
I know you think you’ve lost me
And I know sometimes we fight,
But even though I’ve lost some interest
In the things I used to love
I’ll always be your little girl
And will always need a hug.
Brother, do you miss me?
Because I wish you were around.
I hope what you were looking for
Is exactly what you found.
I know you had to leave me.
You had to eventually move out.
I even miss all the fighting,
But that’s what love’s about.
My friend, do you need me?
Because I’m always here for you.
I know sometimes you’re busy
And have important things to do,
But I wish you would still call me
And set time aside for me
Because I miss us hanging out
And that’s hard for you to see.
My love, do you care?
Do you know the way I feel?
Do you know how much you hurt me?
Because the pain is just too real.
I’d give you the world,
But you wouldn’t do the same.
Did you mean to break my heart?
Was it all a vicious game?
People, are you listening
To the pain you put me through?
Do you know how much it hurts
That I can’t trust you?
Maybe it’s not on purpose,
And everything’s not all your fault.
But life’s not always happy.
That’s one lesson I’ve been taught.
6/05
The last line... I don't know. I just don't like it... Anyway. Comments are WONDERFUL. Thanks so much!
hearts.
kasey.