Comments | tirya56: I just can't stop with these things, can I?

tirya56

I just can't stop with these things, can I?

Feb 23, 2006 01:51

Taken from Straya's journal who took it from someone else. Although it was originally meant for 'art' I have changed it to 'writing' as I do not have much in the way of art to show for myself. Feel free to answer as honestly as possible. After all, how am I to improve if I do not know what I need work on ( Read more... )

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desertcat87 February 22 2006, 18:41:24 UTC

Since you gave me the o so subtle hint on AIM... lol just messing with ya. I post for you!

1.) Very much so I think.
2.) I'm not sure what it is about it... but when I read it, I know it's yours. Maybe because of the longer prose and short catchy sentences. (ie- "Hey look Prowl, I finally got in your pants!" Mwhahaha!)
3.)Does Angst count as a theme? lol Naw, not really. You do alot with past history and culture but I don't think that really qualifes.
4.) No, not really. You were worried about using not enough dialogue but it's really improving I think. Might want to try adding more descriptions as to what the characters are doing while they talk, but it's not that big of a deal. ^__^
5.) Umm... if I were to say any name, I'd say Starhorse. ^_^
6.) Culture! I <3 your insights into TF culture. It rocks my socks off. lol ( ... )

Don't know if I'll be much help but here goes... tiamat1972 June 22 2006, 07:16:14 UTC

1) Do I have a distinct style of writing ( ... )

l_shades June 24 2006, 00:27:50 UTC

1) Yes
2) Yours is an emotic pictorial style (if 'emotic' actually is a word) Very full of moments of thought and emotional 'reaction shots' to situations, as well as chock full of lovely adjectives, similies and metaphors to describe exactly what the scene is.
3) Family, relationships, siblinghood, comraderie
4) Writing speed ;)
5) Um, if I had to pick, it'd be something somewhere in the feild of either Starhorse or Lex
6) Quite honestly, I haven't seen something that you're not brillant at
7) Not applicable
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FF.net reader dov_wolfwood August 8 2006, 04:26:34 UTC

1)Yes
2)The visuals you make. Their just superb at displaying emotion. It all flows rather nicely as well.
3)Strong displays of emotion is all I can put to words.
4)Just some fine tuning on things like speed and such.
5)If I had to pick it'd be PuraJazzBot on FF.net simply because of the feelings. Yours are more devilish and happy, though.
6)Keeping the stories interesting and entertaining.
7)How about a long story every now and then?
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