I just can't stop with these things, can I?
Taken from Straya's journal who took it from someone else. Although it was originally meant for 'art' I have changed it to 'writing' as I do not have much in the way of art to show for myself. Feel free to answer as honestly as possible. After all, how am I to improve if I do not know what I need work on
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1.) Very much so I think.
2.) I'm not sure what it is about it... but when I read it, I know it's yours. Maybe because of the longer prose and short catchy sentences. (ie- "Hey look Prowl, I finally got in your pants!" Mwhahaha!)
3.)Does Angst count as a theme? lol Naw, not really. You do alot with past history and culture but I don't think that really qualifes.
4.) No, not really. You were worried about using not enough dialogue but it's really improving I think. Might want to try adding more descriptions as to what the characters are doing while they talk, but it's not that big of a deal. ^__^
5.) Umm... if I were to say any name, I'd say Starhorse. ^_^
6.) Culture! I <3 your insights into TF culture. It rocks my socks off. lol
7.) I am not even going to answer that, you darn well know what I'm going to say. ;)
8.) You're a 10! No, not saying that because you're my friend either. Honestly, I think you're very talented and I know right now you're probably going to be modest because you're cool like that, but you are. *hugs and hands you a plushie 'Aid*
Yey! There you go, first post! Mwhahaha!
Your goldfishie friend,
-Shann
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