Try, Part 5

[timehasa_way]

Part 4

Comments

[corbyinoz]

Oh, I loved this! Poor, sweet, sad Jensen. Such a heartfelt story, so well done. Thanks for a great read.
Corby

[timehasa_way]

Thank you! I was pretty terrified of posting last night, so I'm really glad you enjoyed.

♥

[goldie3]

A beautiful story and the emotions that you invoked through this story felt so real and heartfelt.

Jensen's struggle to deal with everything was portrayed perfectly. And when he finally let go all the feelings that he had hidden, in front of Jared's mother, it was downright heartbreaking. I honestly teared up a little at that point.

The way Jared changed felt real. Even though I often felt like hitting him, the way he behaved was completely believable. He made mistakes but he was willing to make uo for them. And that's what makes the difference.

Jensen's father and Jared's mother were two characters that really made an impact. The scene where father and son finally talked, amazing.

I enjoyed reading this a lot. Thanks for sharing :-)

[timehasa_way]

Thank you so much for reading, and for the lovely comment! Glad you enjoyed. :)

[snowphilosophy]

I loved this! I felt so sorry for Jensen and was really happy to see that people started to treat him the way he deserved to be treated in the end.

Great job!

[timehasa_way]

Aww, thank you!! :)

[jsluv]

That was such a great and sweet story had me crying at times and wanting to kill Riley but all and all One HELL of a story Thanks so much for sharing it with us all :)

[timehasa_way]

Aww, thank you so much! :D

[karfraegh]

loved this babe... so needed to read something like this today... HUGS XXX

[timehasa_way]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! *HUGS*