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miss_aztec57 in time_and_chips

Poem

Jan 19, 2009 10:20

Im not the greatest at writing a story so i thought i would try something different and write a poem. The poem is written from the Doctor's point of view. Helpful comments or crit would be nice =] (Just dont be too harsh!)

( I whisper her name...... )

Comments 4

thistwilight January 19 2009, 05:27:24 UTC

Aw, this is gorgeous!

miss_aztec57 January 19 2009, 09:26:44 UTC

Thanku very much! =]

cytherea999 January 19 2009, 06:38:53 UTC

That's lovely, and it sounds just like something he would write.
Great Job!

miss_aztec57 January 19 2009, 09:27:40 UTC

Yay! Thats wat I hoped! Thanku! =]