Poem
Im not the greatest at writing a story so i thought i would try something different and write a poem. The poem is written from the Doctor's point of view. Helpful comments or crit would be nice =] (Just dont be too harsh!)
In The Doctor's Eyes
Her golden hair shines magically
Hands clasped together she spins
Laughing, giggling
Warmth blossoms through me
Her eyes lock with mine
An electric current
A single jolt
Runs through my heart
Her cheeks are tinted
With a perfect blush
Smiling, happy
Eyes gleaming with excitement
She glances up
A snowflake
A pinprick
Settles on her eyelashes
She walks over
Snow crunching beneath her
Breathless, Ecstatic
Her hand clasps mine
Warmth against cold
I whisper her name
Rose
In The Doctor's Eyes
Her golden hair shines magically
Hands clasped together she spins
Laughing, giggling
Warmth blossoms through me
Her eyes lock with mine
An electric current
A single jolt
Runs through my heart
Her cheeks are tinted
With a perfect blush
Smiling, happy
Eyes gleaming with excitement
She glances up
A snowflake
A pinprick
Settles on her eyelashes
She walks over
Snow crunching beneath her
Breathless, Ecstatic
Her hand clasps mine
Warmth against cold
I whisper her name
Rose