The Price (Part 5/?)

[tifaching]

Sam watched from inside the glass doors as Dean drove out of the parking lot, the unmarked cop car close on his tail. He gripped the bar tightly to keep from running out the door after him, sure that this plan was as bad as they came. The plan set the path they were on now though and Sam had to follow it, no matter how afraid he was for his brother

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[serendip50]

I've not read this fiction before so when I received your post for chapter 5 I had to do a quick read from the beginning...hehe

[tifaching]

Poor Dean just thinks so badly of himself that he's sure everyone else feels the same way. All of Sam's guilty, trying to help comments are just reaching Dean's ears completely wrong.

Oh, I want to beat those boys that set Sam up. What a bunch of dicks. No comment on what's going to happen when Dean gets pimped out (mostly because I'm not even sure yet).

The plan goes into motion in the next chapter and I already have that written (in my head, at least) so I know where it's going to go. Bobby will definitely be involved.

I know you won't resist at least one more debaucery...LOL, well, no I won't. At least one, but that's likely to be a doozy.

John will show up and he's gonna be PISSED. And guilty, but mostly pissed.

Thanks so much for such an awesome comment!
Stay tuned!

[biketest]

Wow, I've reread this story so many times over the last couple of years, I'm so happy to see you're still working on it! And that it's still delightfully messed up. I especially loved the scene in the diner, how he was forced to sit between the two cops. ;D

[tifaching]

Wow, really? I am still working on it. Sometimes the muse takes a while to get going. The scene in the diner is one that's been written for quite a while. I just had to have a few others to go with it.

Thanks!

[valgem5]

more ,soon please!

[tifaching]

I'll do my best!

[grean]

I only just finished the earlier bits and I find this. I am going to be sick to my stomach till Bobby destroys these pigs. Please update soon, please.

[tifaching]

I'll get more up as soon as I can!

[varkelton]

Ooh, I was so glad I saw this last night. This story continues to be so beautifully fucked up. I can not wait for the next part - I'm pretty shameless for my love of Dean!whump. Though at this point the only way I see it getting worse for him is if those boys make good on their threat to go after Sammy. Of course, I'm not sure about Dean keeping his sanity if, after everything he's done to keep Sammy safe, his brother gets raped after all... ::whimpers:: Please don't keep us in suspense too much longer!

[tifaching]

LOL, glad it's still suitably fucked up. The next part will be up sooner than the last part, that's all I can promise!