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Brigit's Flame -- "Digging"

Apr 05, 2009 02:21

Prompt: "digging"
Word Count: 588
Warnings: some language
Author's Note: Meet Nick and Theo, the protagonists of my Script Frenzy. :D I was stuck with the prompt and figured I'd let them play around, since I need to be thinking about them anyway. :) Thanks to eltea for beta work, as always! ^^

( Theo extricated a portrait-sized picture frame from a pile of fragments like it and raised it to fit his face. )

[length] 1k, [character - original] nick deveraux, [genre] humor, [year] 2009, [rating] pg, [original] brigit's flame, [character - original] theo alton, [genre] friendship

Comments 18

chamyl April 5 2009, 12:56:43 UTC

Haha XD

This is awesome as always >D Will you be posting the entire thing somewhere once it's done?

also kill me and my slash goggles plz -.-;;;

“Pink,” Theo remarked absently, jabbing the largest blade of the Swiss army knife at the packing tape. “Green. Blue. None.”
==epic XDDD

tierfal April 6 2009, 01:53:22 UTC

Oh, man. I guess I ought to find a place to display the whole thing afterward, oughtn't I? XD Or I could just email the PDF to everyone who's interested. XD

lol, your slash goggles are well-placed! >3

Haha, 8D!

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tierfal April 6 2009, 01:55:29 UTC

Why, thank you! 8D

...it's looking like I'll have to make it available. XD I'm thinking I'll either upload the PDF to MediaFire and link to it, or I'll email it out to everyone who's interested. This is all, of course, provided that I finish the damn thing in time! XD

drippedonpaper April 8 2009, 00:16:10 UTC

I want to read your SF too!!:)

I do love this, the easy dialogue, the joking. Somehow, writing anything amusing or funny is so hard from me. I wish I could but so far, even when I try, my writing doesn't seem to have much sense of humor.

I love the idea that two "modern" guys go retro with a record player. Refreshing in a way:)

And I love the part about "meist"

You're a great writer. I envy your ability to write humourously.

I can't wait to read your SF!!!

tierfal April 8 2009, 06:13:27 UTC

Oh, my, thank you!! ^^; Dialogue is... my favorite thing, and the easiest for me, and silly dialogue makes it even easier. XD The Pat Benatar plus record player bit is half-autobiographical -- except that my dad just had his under the CD player, instead of in the attic. :D

I will definitely add you to my list of people who get top priority for SF viewing! ^^

richelle2972 April 5 2009, 20:17:50 UTC

Ha, ha, these guys are great. : ) We gets to read the Script Frenzy when you're done? Please?

tierfal April 6 2009, 01:57:58 UTC

I'm glad you're liking them; I'm having way too much fun. XD

YOU GETS! One way or another, I'll figure out how to let anyone who's interested read the sucker. :D

terravayne April 6 2009, 03:23:32 UTC

Haha, the banter cracked me up. Most of the entries this week were angsty or dramatic so this was like a breath of fresh air. Some of the lines ("me-ist") sound just like how a couple of friends would tease each other. This was delightful. Wonderful job!

tierfal April 7 2009, 02:05:50 UTC

Angsty and dramatic can be fun, but silliness is my forte! XD

Glad you liked it, and thank you!! :)

desert_rose April 9 2009, 08:54:19 UTC

Hi there ( ... )

tierfal April 10 2009, 07:02:59 UTC

They're the two main characters of my ongoing movie script, so they definitely seem to take the format with them! The dialogue with those two just doesn't leave me alone -- I'm glad you liked it! :)

Excellent suggestions all around. Thank you! :)