Understanding [14/17]

[neshel]

Title: Understanding [14/17]
Rating: NC-17 overall

Pairing/Characters: Mohinder/Sylar, Ensemble

Spoilers: Seasons 1 & 2, and some of the online comics.
Warnings: None! This part is rated PG-13 for mild language only.

This Time: Sylar ponders his situation and his next move, while Mohinder is forced to deal with Peter's concern.

A/N: The delay

Comments

[bonniesrg]

I was so engrossed in this fic, can't wait for the next chapter. Poor Momo really doesn't want to share his feelings with Peter and Sylar can't get Momo off his mind.

[neshel]

Glad to hear you're enjoying it! Thanks for commenting. =)

[eridanie]

FINALLY!
I am so enthralled with this series that I was even able to overlook the use of an illogically double negative word that I hate, and that's saying a lot cuz I let pointless little logical details wig me out with a fairly neurotic frequency ie. obsessive comment lecturing on lube with megmathews20.
I love the interesting direction this is going in, both of them thinking about each other all the time, and I'm anxious to see how Sylar is going to save the world. I loved Peter and Mohinder's conversation, but I can see why a whip wouldn't have worked for forcing that conversation, oh well.
Great job :D I hope the next one is easier.

[neshel]

An illogically double negative word? There was a double negative in Mo's dialog that I have now removed after reading this comment the first time (I sorta meant too anyway but I waffled and then I was tired), but speech doesn't comply to grammar rules and, um, was that even what you were talking about?

*twitch* I'm not a perfectionist.... noooo.... *fails*

Heh, ya, whip therapy was a nice idea, but this require finesse. That and, apparently, a 5 hour wait in an empty train station. XD

^_^ Thank you so much and, god, so do I. Except that I've realized that pretty much every character I've written into this so far is going to be in the next chapter and um... well it should be interesting to see how it goes.

[eridanie]

I know speech doesn't conform, and it's a totally acceptable, if nonstandard word, It's just me who has the problem, cuz my brain works too literally,
Irregardless; the prefix ir- meaning not, and the suffix -less meaning without, it actually comes down to meaning not without regard, ultimately meaning with regard too, which I think is the opposite of what was meant. But it is always used in the way you used it in common speech, and my hatred for it is unwarranted unless I want to associate only in snobby academic circles. So don't worry it's totally on me for being a freak :D
I can't wait to see the next one

[eridanie]

crap that was me (of couse) I have no idea how it became anonymous. sorry.

[teecub]

Mujahahaha! Why, indeed, did Sylar leave you alive, Mohinder? Poor Mohinder. Peter isn’t about to let up, is he? Hmmm. Now the boys know that Adam is with him, too. I wonder what will happen now? Also, it’s awesome that the woman from the future is with Adam! <3

Peter’s interrogation of Mohinder was also great! Mohinder’s momentary freak-out was really fun to read, though I did feel bad for him during it. Lovely chapter! Thank you for sharing it <3

[neshel]

Yay! Positive reactions to Patricia make me an enormous amount of happy. Ever since I read "The Ten Brides of Takezo Kensei" and decided Adam was definitely a part of this fic, Patricia has been the 10th bride (in this fic). Except I've been deathly afraid that the general hatred for OCs would spoil this so... Yay!!

So glad the Peter/Mohinder conversation came across so well. Eee! Thank you for commenting!

[mabetini]

WEEEEEEEEE!!!

Okay first of all I ADORE your Peter. And how awesome is it for Adam and Sylar to be manipulating...er...working together?! This was awesome buildup and I can tell something big is going to go down when everyone clashes together!!

Next part pleeeeeeeaaaaase!!!!!

[neshel]

Peter was my favourite character when I first started watching Heroes, so despite the fact that he's fallen down several rungs in my favourites scale I do still adore him and have tried hard to write him well. So, ya, your comment made me very happy.

Heh, next part um... hopefully not nearly as long a wait. *Is so embarrassed.*

Nikki was actually my favourite to start with...

[original_tinks]

Then Sylar took over. I suffered Sylar-mania. I actually never paid much attention to Mohinder either [didn't like his character that much *shrugs* boring?] until...*pause for dramatics* the tuning fork moment. Yeah. *nods*

[widestance75]

Totally engrossed and then BAM it ends, but that's OK, I can appreciate na good cliffhanger! :-)

Loved this: Sylar couldn’t resist letting out an amused chuckle as he deliberately ran his eyes along the invisible line on her forehead where he might draw his trademark incision. because I COULD TOTALLY SEE ZQ DOING THIS! And oh God it would be the hottest thing ever and I'd rewind it again and again. (I'm odd.)

I liked Sylar's spike of jealousy toward Adam and Patricia, and think you've set things up fabulously.

At this: “You consider Sylar part of your private life?” Peter quirked an eyebrow at that and Mohinder sighed deeply. I freaking yelled out loud, Oooo, good one, Peter!

Love!

[neshel]

You think you'd be used to the cliffhangers by now, seeing as pretty much every single chapter ends with one. XD

because I COULD TOTALLY SEE ZQ DOING THIS! And oh God it would be the hottest thing ever and I'd rewind it again and again. (I'm odd.)
I kinda got inspiration for that from the scene with Maya in S2 where he's drawing a line across the back of her head with his finger while hugging her. You KNOW he's imagining slicing her skull open.

I freaking yelled out loud, Oooo, good one, Peter!
AWESOME!

*claps happily*

Thank you!!

Totally lurvs your fic

[original_tinks]

I caught that too! His scenes with Maya always kill me so dead...like, kissing her while he pulls in the motel room door to hide her brother's dead body. Hugging her while imagining splitting her skull open. Ouh! My all-time favourite though is actually a passer-through. The guy from the Mexican jail, when he found Maya and Alejandro's Wanted poster. And he calls over Sylar to tell him they're travelling in a car with murderers. For me, that was a total ROFL [Rolph, as if it were a name =P] moment. I was like....if only that guy knew...he just called over the biggest one of them all...