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[thoth_moon]

I've gotten a spurt with the second chapter of "One Does Experiment" and I'm up to this paragraph, and I'm unsure whether during revision it should be cut down at all or not. As of now it reads

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[89raspberry]

So do you still right your "storys"?

[thoth_moon]

Yeppers ^^ I've got an idea for this really sick one that I want to do for Halloween....

[89raspberry]

So you should send me one or somthin.

[89raspberry]

Or tell me where to go to read one.

[thoth_moon]

This is one of the sites I've got my stuff on: http://www.fanfiction.net/~thothmoon