AMY IT WAS SO GOOD!! AND SWEET AND JUST REALLY ROMANTIC ;A; I WANT TO LEAVE A REALLY LONG COMMENT OF EVERYTHING I LOVE BUT TBH I'D JUST BE QUOTING THE WHOLE FIC.
the beginning was really great, kyungsoo being sassy and wearing sandals and falling and cHENSOO.
then jongin frick dude i loved how you wrote jongin with the waves and the surfing and the running away it was so great ;;
"But it's hard not to act shy when someone like Jongin is looking at you with smiling eyes, face brighter than the setting sun" BYE
"Kyungsoo watches as Jongin's eyes grow darker and deeper like the sea. The loneliness that tints Jongin's voice is subtle, but Kyungsoo can hear it. He wants to get rid of it, let it sink to end of the ocean and bring Jongin back up.
"But the sand's always there," Kyungsoo offers hopefully. Jongin turns to look at him, and now it's his turn to to be confused. "The sand will always greet you." TEARS FELL DOWN MY EYES THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL
"If Jongin is a wave that always comes and goes, then it'll only be a matter of time before he leaves again." do you think this was a joke did you want to hurt me
when jongin took kyungsoo to his secret hide out /lays down/
"Because I loved someone who didn't love me, because it killed me knowing that." seriously the sekai hurt my heart
"I'm going to leave again," Jongin finally says. "When summer's over, I'm going to go. Maybe I'll see the world or something." He chuckles at himself for the ridiculous idea, because now his entire world is right in front of him, completely unaware of it." HIS ENTIRE WORLD IS RIGHT IN FRONT OF HIM AMY JFC WAY TO STAB SOMEONE IN THE HEART
WHEN JONGIN SHOWED UP TO KYUNGSOOS APARTMENT U GH NO!! WHY!! HE WAS SO WORRIED FOR SOO THEN THEY KISSED AND THEN HE LEFT !!1 WHY
then the closure with sehun ;AA; trust sehun to just out right tell jongin he wasnt in love with him /pets jongin
"Because you're here," Jongin answers "And I want to be anywhere you are." /flops happily this was perfect
OK I THINK IVE BURDENED YOU ENOUGH THANK YOU SO MUCH IT WAS LOVELY AND PERFECT
cries thank you T_T as long as you like it then this is good enough yus u_u sobs your comment is so beautiful /pets it. omg you were no burden at all tbh i'm sorry i took forever and kept asking questions about it tbh i just didn't want to write something you would totally not like ;; thank you again for everything <333333
the beginning was really great, kyungsoo being sassy and wearing sandals and falling and cHENSOO.
then jongin frick dude i loved how you wrote jongin with the waves and the surfing and the running away it was so great ;;
"But it's hard not to act shy when someone like Jongin is looking at you with smiling eyes, face brighter than the setting sun" BYE
"Kyungsoo watches as Jongin's eyes grow darker and deeper like the sea. The loneliness that tints Jongin's voice is subtle, but Kyungsoo can hear it. He wants to get rid of it, let it sink to end of the ocean and bring Jongin back up.
"But the sand's always there," Kyungsoo offers hopefully. Jongin turns to look at him, and now it's his turn to to be confused. "The sand will always greet you." TEARS FELL DOWN MY EYES THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL
"If Jongin is a wave that always comes and goes, then it'll only be a matter of time before he leaves again." do you think this was a joke did you want to hurt me
when jongin took kyungsoo to his secret hide out /lays down/
"Because I loved someone who didn't love me, because it killed me knowing that." seriously the sekai hurt my heart
"I'm going to leave again," Jongin finally says. "When summer's over, I'm going to go. Maybe I'll see the world or something." He chuckles at himself for the ridiculous idea, because now his entire world is right in front of him, completely unaware of it." HIS ENTIRE WORLD IS RIGHT IN FRONT OF HIM AMY JFC WAY TO STAB SOMEONE IN THE HEART
WHEN JONGIN SHOWED UP TO KYUNGSOOS APARTMENT U GH NO!! WHY!! HE WAS SO WORRIED FOR SOO THEN THEY KISSED AND THEN HE LEFT !!1 WHY
then the closure with sehun ;AA; trust sehun to just out right tell jongin he wasnt in love with him /pets jongin
"Because you're here," Jongin answers "And I want to be anywhere you are." /flops happily this was perfect
OK I THINK IVE BURDENED YOU ENOUGH THANK YOU SO MUCH IT WAS LOVELY AND PERFECT
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sobs your comment is so beautiful /pets it.
omg you were no burden at all tbh i'm sorry i took forever and kept asking questions about it tbh i just didn't want to write something you would totally not like ;;
thank you again for everything <333333
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