[multi-part] it was the worst of times...
Title: It was the worst of times...
Pairing: Taiga x Hokuto
Rating/Warnings: NC-17
Word Count: 9291
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction, and only the words are mine.
Summary: He wants things to be OK between them, and they are mostly, but he wants them to be really OK, only he doesn’t know how to make things right again, if he even can.
A/N: ( Read more... )
Pairing: Taiga x Hokuto
Rating/Warnings: NC-17
Word Count: 9291
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction, and only the words are mine.
Summary: He wants things to be OK between them, and they are mostly, but he wants them to be really OK, only he doesn’t know how to make things right again, if he even can.
A/N: ( Read more... )
The part that hurts me the most is that I keep thinking that maybe, maybe there's some truth in this, in the way your wrote them. Maybe things happened that way, or at least some of them, and maybe that's why they can never be the same again, and it hurts, IT REALLY HURTS, but it's also so beautifully tragic, and you've written them in such a realistic way that I at least enjoyed reading their pain (and I will go to hell for this, probably). Do I need to mention the sex scenes? Not really, they are absolutely great like every sex scene you write, BUT YES I DIED IN THAT SHOWER!
Taiga's dark emotions gradually taking over him, and the way he unleashed them on Hokuto, and yet Hokuto still taking all, accepting all, and how they kept going back and forth until it all became too unbearable T_____T I'm ruined in ways I never thought I would be...
“Unless you can convince me not too.”--> wow this part. I think my heart stopped for a moment. Too raw, too short, yet carrying so many hidden and obvious feelings. Hokuto reaching his limits was also unbearable to read...
BUT AHGJAGKDGHSD YUTOYAMA? THAT CAUGHT ME OFF GUARD, AND I LOVED READING AS MUCH I LOVED THE PAIN IT GAVE ME, WELL DONE.
Juri is truly the captain of the HokkuTai ship, and he's proven it so many times before, and I love him for being the way he is, and I love you for writing him that way. The last conversation ended me completely, but if I could go back and read that fic from the start as if I haven't read it before, I'd definitely do so.
I really don't know what else to say, aside from a big thank you for writing and sharing this with us.
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I have to say, this is totally my headcanon now >_< I noticed the YutoYama parallels while watching old Shounen Club episodes (the whole, one is the centre and is overtaken by the other) and the more research I did into it, the more feels I got. If you watch the behind the scenes of the Bakaleya movie and in Shokuras around that time they seem so cute and friendly and then HokuJe get really popular and Bakaleya fall apart and then things are awkward between HokuTai after that...so yeah, I definitely want to believe that there's some truth in this! But maybe that's because I'm such a glutton for angst >_<
Haha, I love your phrasing about Juri being the captain of the HokuTai ship >_< It's totally true though, I think he genuinely does ship them as much as we do!! So of course there has to be some mention of Juri helping them out in like everything I write >_<
Anyways, thank you so much for reading and for such an awesome comment!!! ♥
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