Samples (Please note that both samples must take place in Route_29’s setting.)
First Person Sample: [There was a young man sitting there in the Pokemon center, his eyes sort of vacant. The Charmander next to him watched him curiously, as it let out a small "char char" of worry. Soon however, the life came back into Perry's eyes as he looked down at Charmander and let out a soft sound.]
Rrrrgh.
[The soft beak-chitter noise that the trainer let out soothed the Pokemon's nerves. When he had first met the trainer, it was acting like a dumb animal when people came by, hiding in the bushes. And then it would do a one-eighty in personality and put on this hat of theirs before moving on. After a while, Charmander had gotten to know him better. Perry looked down at him and smiled.]
Rrrrrgh.
[And Perry reached out and patted the small fire-salamander's head. Charmander sighed. He really needed to get Perry some human speech lessons.]
Third Person Sample: Sleeping at night, Perry often found a place to rest, curled up in what would look to most people like an animal bedding down for the night. Though Perry's mind was awash with worry as he watched the stars twinkle in the night sky. Why was he here, away from Phineas, Ferb, Candice, mom, dad, the Major, Carl, everyone? He should be at home, foiling Doofenshmirtz's latest scheme. Who would they get to replace him? Certainly not Agent P from across the street and he scoffed at the idea of Agent Planty taking his place. He was Doofenshmirtz's opponent, not a plant or a Chihuahua!
Still, it worried Perry that he was here, trapped. His watch which would be buzzing on a foreleg was quiet, and only ticked the time now. The unfamiliar devices and the small lizard thing, a Charmander he remembered being told, was sleeping against him. Still, he flipped open his Pokedex and aimed it at himself.
"Not a pokemon," reported the Pokedex and Perry scowled. Of course he wasn't a pokemon, he wasn't even HUMAN. He was a Platypus, not this... this silly human body! This was worse than the time he got brain-swapped with Candice. At least he had been able to foil Doofenshmirtz...
Perry let out a sigh. He even missed his Nemesis. That was saying a lot considering his joy in life was to kick him in the head and listen to the man spout off one-liners capped with "Curse you Perry the Platypus!"
That was one thing. How would that phrase even WORK now? Seriously, it was enough to make a Platypus worry.
The Platypus-turned-human chittered. And curled up along the side of the road. But he didn't fall into a deep sleep for there were too many dangers in this new world. And Perry didn't like it.
And when all seemed quiet, the unused voice for Perry resounded in his sleep. "Wan... home..."
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(Please note that both samples must take place in Route_29’s setting.)
First Person Sample: [There was a young man sitting there in the Pokemon center, his eyes sort of vacant. The Charmander next to him watched him curiously, as it let out a small "char char" of worry. Soon however, the life came back into Perry's eyes as he looked down at Charmander and let out a soft sound.]
Rrrrgh.
[The soft beak-chitter noise that the trainer let out soothed the Pokemon's nerves. When he had first met the trainer, it was acting like a dumb animal when people came by, hiding in the bushes. And then it would do a one-eighty in personality and put on this hat of theirs before moving on. After a while, Charmander had gotten to know him better. Perry looked down at him and smiled.]
Rrrrrgh.
[And Perry reached out and patted the small fire-salamander's head. Charmander sighed. He really needed to get Perry some human speech lessons.]
Third Person Sample: Sleeping at night, Perry often found a place to rest, curled up in what would look to most people like an animal bedding down for the night. Though Perry's mind was awash with worry as he watched the stars twinkle in the night sky. Why was he here, away from Phineas, Ferb, Candice, mom, dad, the Major, Carl, everyone? He should be at home, foiling Doofenshmirtz's latest scheme. Who would they get to replace him? Certainly not Agent P from across the street and he scoffed at the idea of Agent Planty taking his place. He was Doofenshmirtz's opponent, not a plant or a Chihuahua!
Still, it worried Perry that he was here, trapped. His watch which would be buzzing on a foreleg was quiet, and only ticked the time now. The unfamiliar devices and the small lizard thing, a Charmander he remembered being told, was sleeping against him. Still, he flipped open his Pokedex and aimed it at himself.
"Not a pokemon," reported the Pokedex and Perry scowled. Of course he wasn't a pokemon, he wasn't even HUMAN. He was a Platypus, not this... this silly human body! This was worse than the time he got brain-swapped with Candice. At least he had been able to foil Doofenshmirtz...
Perry let out a sigh. He even missed his Nemesis. That was saying a lot considering his joy in life was to kick him in the head and listen to the man spout off one-liners capped with "Curse you Perry the Platypus!"
That was one thing. How would that phrase even WORK now? Seriously, it was enough to make a Platypus worry.
The Platypus-turned-human chittered. And curled up along the side of the road. But he didn't fall into a deep sleep for there were too many dangers in this new world. And Perry didn't like it.
And when all seemed quiet, the unused voice for Perry resounded in his sleep. "Wan... home..."
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Welcome to the Wonderful World of Pokemon!
Congratulations, you have a fun and exciting adventure awaiting you.
Now that you've been accepted...
[○] Please respond to this with your character's journal.
[○] Comment in the Taken Character's post.
[○] Comment to the Friend Add/Remove, and update your friends list.
[○] Join the following communities: route-29, route_006, route_1065.
[○] If you reserved, please let us know that they've been accepted.
Thank you! See you in Johto!
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