Comments | thescarletscar: Chapter 20: Marriage

thescarletscar

Chapter 20: Marriage

Oct 12, 2006 02:59

Chapter Summary:
Jin's treacherous love life.
His marriage.
Kame's letter to pi once again.

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Pi told me, Papa’s status as a celebrity made his love life a difficult one. Or should I say that treacherous was a better term. His relationship with Kamenashi was one good example. In addition, grandfather did not approve of Mama’s decision in ( Read more... )

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thescarletscar October 11 2006, 19:52:12 UTC

it should end before chapter 30. heh :) glad you liked it! thanks!

kanika_ishtar October 11 2006, 19:57:18 UTC

The grammer looks fine to me. ^-^

But just...wow. I'm amazed at how well the story conveys emotion. It's heart wrenching and beautiful, and just...gorgeous. Kame's maturity is so different to me too, since that sort of thing...you wouldn't ever see it, usually.

thescarletscar October 11 2006, 20:21:28 UTC

the emotions in this fic is amazing. the way it is narrated is so simple, and fic!kame's letters are so simple, but yet each sentence just strikes straight into the heart.

i rather have 100 divabratty!kame than to have him going through anything near this... btw have u watched yuuki? i keep linking 'yuuki' to kame in this fic.

kanika_ishtar October 11 2006, 20:33:30 UTC

I think that's what makes it feel so real and conveys the emotions so strongly...the simplicity.

And I do too! Yuuki was so sad, but simple and beautiful in way close to this.

rubypurple October 11 2006, 20:07:49 UTC

you're slowly crushing my effin heart... :(

thescarletscar October 11 2006, 20:23:26 UTC

i'm crushing my own heart too. i had to resort to watching silly shows like "dude, where's my car" and "ice age" to cheer myself up after translating and editing the chapters. :/

elva_chan October 11 2006, 20:41:30 UTC

The last three lines are so touching TvT and they remind me of 1loT, which didn't help me to hold back my tears ;_; this fic reminds me soo much of 1loT and Yuuki. Aw, really, nobody deserves living this T-T it's too painful >.<
Aw~ sorry I can't think of anything else to write, I'm too sleepy~ but I'm glad I read more chapters before going to bed.
Thanks for translating~

takagi October 12 2006, 01:51:54 UTC

*hugs* glad you enjoyed these chapters too! :)

crimsonredd October 11 2006, 20:43:02 UTC

Kame's letters are amazingly written w/ pure heart and soul. Thanks for translating...
Btw, the grammar is ok, I can understand the story ... :)

takagi October 12 2006, 01:55:54 UTC

i'm really impressed with the author for being able to come up with something so... painful err i mean touching.

thanks for reading~ ^^