Prince of Tennis - Waiting - Taka/Fuji

[theotheralissa]

Title: Waiting
Pairing/Characters: Taka x Fuji
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Does not belong to me.

Comments

[bookshop]

Adapting, Fuji waited for a very precise moment to pull away, bite his lip, and feel pride burning in the back of his throat.

Gosh, that's gorgeous. *reads more!*

[bookshop]

This is really, really, really lovely. Nobody writes Fuji/Kawamura and that makes me very sad :( because apart from Yuuta (seriously! Fuji is the only character I've ever met that is fucked up enough to make me think incest would be a healthy relationship for him!) there is no one else I can see Fuji with. He clearly has a huge predatory crush on everyone Taka-san in the series and it's very very rare that you see that explored at all, much less as nicely as it is here. Very lovely job. I especially love the character voicing--Fuji is very Fuji, Taka as steady and obliging and open (virtually everything Fuji is not, which is another thing that makes them very good together) as always.

I also love this: Fuji had to tilt his head up to see Kawamura's eyes. He followed when Kawamura shifted from one foot to the other. This time he put the hand on Kawamura's shoulder

[aiwritingfic]

"Taka is steady and obliging and open" <-- EXACTLY why I love Taka. :) (Sorry, took two liberties: replied to your comment and changed a(n)--assumed--typo in the quote.)

I never really know why Taka loves Fujiko, but there's enough girl in Fuji to suit Taka, who always strikes me as such a straight guy, and the first one of the Seigaku regulars who will get married, and who has the best possibility/likelihood of living happily ever after. :)

[missitar]

I second the comment of Fuji + Kawamura being hugely underficced; it was really great to read this story not just in light of that, but also because the dynamic you've given Fuji and Taka is, well, dynamic. The characterizations sit really well, at least with me, and your writing is really smooth and easy to read. I love how awkward the situation is and how Fuji reacts to that--especially how he keeps so much of what he's thinking unsaid, because that's Fuji in a nutshell, not wanting to lose control.

I realize that I've come out of nowhere, which I hope doesn't surprise or alarm you, but it was a real pleasure to read this. Thank you!

[airairo]

I third it. XD I'd love to see more fic for them. Thank you very much! I'm glad the characterization worked for you, they really are fun to write together. ♥

I'm not alarmed, I'm happy for the feedback! Thank you for reading and glad you liked it. ^__^

[duowolf]

loved the fic:)

[airairo]

I'm glad you did! Thank you. ^__^

[mneomosyne]

^-^ Lovely! <3

[airairo]

Thank you! Glad you liked it. ^__^