Nothing Goes My Way

[thefeistage]

Okay, I've been told by a few people (in ALL of the reviews) on FFN that I should continue this and that it can't remain a one-shot, like I had intended. 
I just want to know... It is really THAT good? Geez, it's not even 400 words!! xD

What do you guys think?

Comments

[insomniackj]

It IS good!
But I think you should leave it as it is. A second part might take away the intensity of the piece.
Wow 8D

[thefeistage]

Thanks so much!! <3
My thoughts exactly. I'm glad someone thinks the same way as I do.
Hahah, thanks~ -^^-