I can has art advice pls?

[thedreya]

Dear persons who read this,

I am working on a new painting, it looks (kinda) like this so far (my photographic skills are lame):

Critique Me Please!
(Please click on the photo to be taken to the picasa album, where I have two pictures of it.)
I would like you to critique it. What would you change? What is working okay? What would you leave be but do differently next time?
Thank you very much!
<3
Dreya