Adventures of Cradle-Robbing Perverts Ch1 part 2

[thebitterend327]

Part 2 of Chapter one of the OMG Snape and Sirius are in a love-triangle with a STUDENT!fic.
The fic features: stupidity, implausbility, and assassination of my beloved Snape's character. (poor Sev)
The MST features: Severus Snape and Minerva McGonagall still serving time for their stunt with Lockhart.

Comments

[reg_flint]

[Snape: I am an enigmatic genius, not a fool!]
Oh god I love that line- along with [McGonagall: Severus Snape: Spanish Conquistador.] My Snape concept is entirely asexual and therefore it is more funny that it normally would be, this ficcing juxtaposition. Highly entertaining and there was a wad of sarcasm, and irony, from McGonagall and Severus. I really enjoyed that very much.

[thebitterend327]

I am glad you enjoyed it. I certainly enjoyed writing it. I imagine Snape asexually as well. This fic is a horrible assassination of our dear Severus. However, I have another one saved that's much much worse.

[reg_flint]

I would like to read much more,that is a fact. You seem to understand the two quite well. You have Ravenclaw-style wit, but with enough irony to land you in Slytherin. Your work is a minor joy - I take myself far too seriously most of the time unless it's twisted irony or harK! here comes snark! Breath of fresh air and under the airiness a very serious commentary - I'll stop raving so you can keep your head from floating. Lockhart, you are NOT.

[thebitterend327]

Thank you very much. I appreciate your complements. I'm glad you think I understand McGonagall and Snape. They are my favorite characters. I am happy you think I can get inside their heads. I've always thought that Ravenclaw and Slytherin were the best houses. I am working on the second chapter currently. It may be up later if I happen to finish it.

[reg_flint]

Looking forward to it, but no pressure. I am writing tonight too ... yawn. A series of ten 100-word drabbles on Severus or 5 to 10 200-word drabbles. Grandpa Livius gets to play a minor role ;)
Ravenclaw and Sltherin...Slytherclaw,,,yet still if I had to choose: Slytherin all the way.
More sarcasm on your journal, please! It tweaks my Schadenfroh bone.

[thebitterend327]

I anticipate reading these. I'm glad you kept Livius around. Few people can pull off a plausible, likeable original character. It's a toss up for me, between Slytherin and Ravenclaw. Either is acceptable. More sarcasm will be comming your way soon.

[reg_flint]

Excellent (Percy rubs his hands together pompously)
Excellent, more sarcasm, we really need more angst in our lives (Harry, the odd boy he is)
Excellent! Sarcam! and Irony! how bitter the 80% cooca Honeydukes chocolates are....not as scathing as your quill!! ;)