ANONNNNNNN I LOVE YOU SO MUCH i'm sorry this comment is so late!!! i've been a little busy this weekend but i ran home straight from class to read this :D
Baekhyun looks the stranger up and down. He’s cute, in a scruffy sort of way. Some people might be into that. Maybe 6 Sexy Points out of a possible 10. already i can feel that this fic is going to be aMAZING
“Well, I guess we can't be friends then,” he says drily. He’s not altogether serious, but he’s not joking either. If the guy hadn’t already shot himself in the foot by humming along tunelessly to ‘Monday, Monday, then the word ‘groovy’ was definitely the clincher. baekhyun is me
the banana bar jingle oh my god and of course chanyeol would love it THIS IS MY FAVORITE CHANYEOL (i'm so bad at this i'm sorry this whole comment is rly just me screaming)
your minseok is flawless omfg SCRATCH THAT ALL OF YOUR CHARACTERS ARE SO WONDERFUL?????? mr. wu and the Chamber of Terror i'm
Chanyeol laughs, as if this is the most amusing thing in the world. “Silly old me…CHANYEOL IS HAVING
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author-nim, while i appreciate the efforts to make this an enjoyable fic for your recipient and the rest of the merry-goers here at baekfest, i would also like to point out something.
a sombrero, while certainly bigger than standard western culture hats, is not something you should classify as a "funny hat". especially if you're going to also don on a stick-on moustache to accompany the look; this is not a costume, and it is not a joke. this is both cultural appropriation of a Mexican symbol and racist because you're utilizing a stereotypical image of what Mexican culture has become associated with for some funny lines.
"Chanyeol rummages around beneath his desk for a moment. He emerges with something enormous and yellow and dumps it in front of Baekhyun
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Once again I apologise for the racism and I thank you for pointing it out. My sole purpose for writing (other than to procrastinate) is to make people smile, and knowing I might have made someone upset with something I wrote is an awful feeling and I'm sorry
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i'm sorry this comment is so late!!! i've been a little busy this weekend but i ran home straight from class to read this :D
Baekhyun looks the stranger up and down. He’s cute, in a scruffy sort of way. Some people might be into that. Maybe 6 Sexy Points out of a possible 10.
already i can feel that this fic is going to be aMAZING
“Well, I guess we can't be friends then,” he says drily. He’s not altogether serious, but he’s not joking either. If the guy hadn’t already shot himself in the foot by humming along tunelessly to ‘Monday, Monday, then the word ‘groovy’ was definitely the clincher.
baekhyun is me
the banana bar jingle oh my god and of course chanyeol would love it THIS IS MY FAVORITE CHANYEOL (i'm so bad at this i'm sorry this whole comment is rly just me screaming)
your minseok is flawless omfg SCRATCH THAT ALL OF YOUR CHARACTERS ARE SO WONDERFUL?????? mr. wu and the Chamber of Terror i'm
Chanyeol laughs, as if this is the most amusing thing in the world. “Silly old me…CHANYEOL IS HAVING ( ... )
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Hahaha the things I make my characters do (and say) sometimes, istg... but that's what makes writing fun <3
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a sombrero, while certainly bigger than standard western culture hats, is not something you should classify as a "funny hat". especially if you're going to also don on a stick-on moustache to accompany the look; this is not a costume, and it is not a joke. this is both cultural appropriation of a Mexican symbol and racist because you're utilizing a stereotypical image of what Mexican culture has become associated with for some funny lines.
"Chanyeol rummages around beneath his desk for a moment. He emerges with something enormous and yellow and dumps it in front of Baekhyun ( ... )
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But thank you! I'm glad it was at least good dialogue.
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authornim ive always loved your fics XD
((the banana gives you away lol))
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Is penis-shaped food a common feature in my writing or something pmsl
Thanks Kei, glad you enjoyed <33333
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