First or Second, that is the question

[theatergeek07]

Ok, not that anyone ever reads my lj but i do have a question for all of you out there. This week I am entering a poetry contest and I have been working on two poems. We are only allowed to submit one piece of writing so I was hoping you guys could commment on which poem you liked better and offer suggestions for any changes I might make. all of

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[ohcaptainurmine]

Oh shit... i completely forgot about the writing contest... i guess it's we're gonna go with In the valley deep then... dennis is being a silly right now and he's screwing up my typing... Hope poem goes well.. can't read, will later

See you
Steph

[ohcaptainurmine]

Not the first one... go with the second one