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Realistic Chapter 10 :)

Mar 05, 2009 21:21

Title: Realistic - Chapter 10/14
Author: theartoffic
Type: LOTR RPS AU
Pairing: Orlando/Elijah
Rating: Adult

Summary: In the 21st century Artificial Intelligence is still in its infancy, some scientists toy with the idea of creating robots that look, and act, and think like human beings; in the future they are going to succeed. Realistics look real, feel ( Read more... )

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verangel March 7 2009, 17:27:51 UTC

I am so glad Elijah asked Orli about Veronica. Still wondering what the ring thing was but the whole thing with the phone calls he ignored and the sister screaming at him...hee...oh well, happy for Elijah! Punched in the gut...*whimpers* You add these little touches that show the abuse he has taken ( ... )

theartoffic March 7 2009, 22:50:15 UTC

The ring was something Veronica had give Orlando as a keepsake. It hadn't mattered to him so he didn't think to take it off. Of course it mattered to Elijah *pets him* Elijah is so very happy and I am too! So happy that you're enjoying it! *hugs you* More soon! :D <3

theartoffic March 17 2009, 02:05:31 UTC

omg, forget what i wrote to you about the ring. I? Am a dumbass! *snorts* I also changed the story since and, well, it's been so long I forgot that I changed the bit about the ring. You'll find out as soon as I post this next part. (I'm working on it now *g*) lols @ self! :P

verangel March 17 2009, 02:41:54 UTC

I am just going by the story you posted. I never knew anything else about the ring. I was just as curious and annoyed as Elijah was about that thing dangling from his neck. He got rid of it this last chapter. It was probably something he took from veronica and said he would wear it around his neck...knowing it would be gone, soon. But, I was curious. You aren't a dumbass. The story is seamless and wonderful. I can't wait for more. SERIOUSLY! hugs you so close xoxoxo v

theartoffic March 17 2009, 14:12:59 UTC

Heh, when I answered your comments on this chapter I'd said something that was wrong! So I'm glad you're just going by what I write in the, you know, actual story! *facepalms* *loves and hugs*

verangel March 17 2009, 03:00:00 UTC

I'm printing this..23 pages of gorgeous I can't wait to read. I am so happy. I was so thinking of this over the last couple of days. It was wishful. Then, it appeared. hugs you xoxoxoagain!!! *happy shivers* v

theartoffic March 17 2009, 14:14:48 UTC

I was thinking about you too! So I knew I had to post. My layout was all messed up and I was waiting to see if I could get it fixed before posting (I didn't know if it would screw up the post) anyway, I finally just reverted to the default and posted :D. *hugs*

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