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Shop or Die

Sep 02, 2010 10:59

Title: Shop or Die
Author: pnai-87
Pairing: Jacob/Bella
Rated: K+
Summary: Jacob, Embry, Quil and Seth have run out of clothes. Emily and Bella take them
shopping. (Prompt request stolen from ( Read more... )

status: completed, one shot, rating: k, genre: humor, genre: general

Comments 22

audreyii_fic September 2 2010, 19:11:16 UTC

"I have a heart condition, Ms. Young, I cannot endure another primary fitting."

The baby is looking at me funny because I am laughing so hard.

pnai_87 September 2 2010, 23:30:44 UTC

I don't like shopping myself, but I'm extremely pessimistic when I go on outings like that. Glad you liked it ^_^

pamymex3girl September 2 2010, 19:35:55 UTC

I love this. Great fic.

pnai_87 September 2 2010, 23:33:44 UTC

It was fun ^_^ Thank you for the awesome prompt

exquisite_ugly September 2 2010, 21:01:45 UTC

This was fun. ;)

The mental image of Jake insisting on showing Bella how his underwear fit cracked me up. hehe. Nice job!

pnai_87 September 3 2010, 04:43:49 UTC

Underwear shopping...that's when you know it's serious...LOL

lita_cena425 September 2 2010, 22:37:26 UTC

This story was so cute. I was wondering if a fic like this would ever exist.

The formatting of this page just about killed me; just saying.

pnai_87 September 2 2010, 22:45:24 UTC

yeah, I'm pretty new to lj. Let's see if I can't fix it. The neat freak in me cries each time I look at it

lita_cena425 September 2 2010, 23:15:59 UTC

Aaw, welcome to LJ!

I kinda am too. I hate when you all post amazing stories and the damn formatting messes them up!

pnai_87 September 2 2010, 23:29:37 UTC

I tried. I tried really hard. It looks better now than before but it still...ugh. Formatting. That's the one big fail lj has for me.

sleepy_sheep683 September 2 2010, 23:20:04 UTC

D'aww- cute!

"“Hey, Legos!”

Just like that the four were completely entranced. The picture they made, crouching around the plastic table, four broad shouldered figures fighting over little plastic blocks... "You so lose 10 years for this,” Bella told Jacob.

A good twenty minutes (six houses, a boat, and something that looked like a dog) and a lot of whining for more time later"

*gigglesnort*

Oh, come on! If you can walk past the Lego shop without wanting to play with it, you have no soul :). This seems to me the only advantage of having children; so you can legitimately piss about with Lego structures for hours on end under the pretence of helping them out.

pnai_87 September 2 2010, 23:36:02 UTC

My deal is there's never enough pieces to make the thing you were going for. or too many. My brother and I tried to make something that took every single lego piece we had...ended up with a half finished house. They never stop being fun though ^_^ Glad you liked it.

sleepy_sheep683 September 3 2010, 19:08:20 UTC

"My deal is there's never enough pieces to make the thing you were going for. or too many."

I found that you never bought Lego, you always inherited it. I remember getting buckets of the stuff from goodness knows where, and when my mate's nephew got old enough for Lego, he got his much the same way (we helped sort the pieces. By which I mean we made helicopters).

Ah, memories...