Picpost: Doujin progress (pg. 3)

[the_z]

EDIT: Page 2 revised and Page 3 added.

This is just a perverted novel pairing I wanted to explore. So, I'm doing so via sketchy doujin. I don't think I worked on it since, ack, last Spring? So, finally, page 2. And if I can hold myself to it, I plan on having another couple of pages done this week. I'll post the progress here and then the final

Comments

[purplesyrup]

Hime-chan is real lucky she didn't get sliced open there. o.o I like the camera angles you got there.

[the_z]

Thank you!

Oh, I'm sure he'll cleave her properly at some point down the line.

[voeltzwagon]

Oh god, she is going to get caught up in the trashbag that hobo is wearing.

[the_z]

Trashbag rape!

[nightambre]

Gotta love the placement of Zangetsu's handle there on the second page...

[the_z]

*rub*

Zangetsu is making a new friend ♥

[shahni]

Oh Orihime. OH ORIHIME!!!

... notgonnahappygasmnotgonnahappygasm... >>"

[the_z]

Yeah, I really think I should've done more with Zangetsu there :/a I didn't want to do too much of the severe-angle copycat imagery of Tite Kubo's stuff, but you know, I think that's one thing that makes the old man really super awesome.

I definitely intend to do more of that with him in upcoming features. On a page of mostly-tight shots he does seem tiny and insignificant, doesn't he? Of course, it could indicate Orihime is only faintly aware of him.

Bah! No excuses, Z. Thank you for the advice! I definitely will re-do that panel. I think he deserves it.

[the_z]

Oh thanks! :D I've always liked working in pencil. It was my first friend.