Fanfiction hmmm?

May 22, 2008 00:17

I'm rereading my KH fic, and there's a few lines I actually like. Namely:

'He was perfect, with his silvery hair and his bright eyes that spoke of knowledge and power and sorrow and of places beyond their island.'

'Sora finally reached the bank, jerking back as the icy wetness ran over his toes. Wincing, he forced himself to plunge deeper and deeper into the water until he could swim freely. '

'He felt wet stone beneath his fingers.'

I think I'm gonna take these lines and write a new, much more awesome fic. :O w00t.
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