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kelseypinkshoe August 1 2010, 21:38:16 UTC
Wow! Even though Ben is batshit insane, I actually feel a little bad for him. Being orphaned would suck so hard (understatement of the year), as well as not being properly diagnosed for PTSD.

Have to say that his plan was incredibly detailed; did you have that all in mind as you were writing? It was very subtle and awesome!

Another great character study! :)

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the_mctavishams August 2 2010, 03:15:18 UTC
OMG his plan was something that literally came to me OVERNIGHT. Like, for serious. I hadn't planned on him being more than just some shitty friend of Finn's that was a ridiculous wank... and then he turned into so much more, and his uber-evil plan just revealed itself to me. So ... to answer your question... yes and no! lol.

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kelseypinkshoe August 3 2010, 00:01:34 UTC
Hah, I love getting overnight ideas! It was definitely a great one, and turned into an excellent plot :)

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garnet812 August 1 2010, 22:25:43 UTC
Now that I know Ben story, I feel a little bad for him, but I still DO NOT like him one bit!!!

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the_mctavishams August 2 2010, 03:15:41 UTC
LOL Don't worry, you're not meant to!! heh. He's still an a-hole.

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anonymous August 1 2010, 22:53:21 UTC
Booooooo Ben but YAYYYYY character studies!!! Very thoughtfully written dear! <3

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the_mctavishams August 2 2010, 03:16:05 UTC
thank you!! :)

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just_jasper August 1 2010, 22:54:05 UTC
I understand Ben more now, I still don't like him any better XD

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the_mctavishams August 2 2010, 03:42:38 UTC
LOL good!! Just cause he's got a crazy history does not mean he's any less guilty of being a douche ;)

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ext_172617 August 2 2010, 00:23:47 UTC
I almost feel sorry for Ben. Only almost though. That's a hell of a lot for a kid to go through, or even an adult. I still don't like him, lol!

My favourite part was the last paragraph, because it just reminded me of how Ben's in prison now. :D

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the_mctavishams August 2 2010, 03:44:05 UTC
haha I know, my husband liked that one, too. Yay for Ben in orange jumpsuit!! :D

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