Comments | the_lost_robot: Darkened: The hermit in the wilds (Part 3/7)

the_lost_robot

Darkened: The hermit in the wilds (Part 3/7)

Feb 01, 2013 19:45

I was going to write the backstory of one adorable little red mech. But then he started talking and talking and said we should go back here because he wanted a life lesson. Well. He didn't want a life lesson, he really just wanted to be in the spotlight (not that he wouldn't be in his own backstory, but he's not very big on logic) then Jazz came ( Read more... )

character: zoom-zoom, transformers fanfiction, story arc: a spark darkened, character: prowl, character: jazz, title: a spark remembrance, verse: the lost bot

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pjlover666 February 1 2013, 12:21:28 UTC

Wonderful chapter!! Ahh, I love the connection between Jazz and Zoom-Zoom and would't mind one bit of reading more about it (actually, I'm quite hoping I get to read more of it!) Hah, and his plan was to cheer up Jazz? *smiles* I'm liking him more and more.
“And you are old and senile,” Zoom-Zoom said cheekily, How can I NOT love him? *snicker*
And whoa... Counter Shift really hurt Jazz.... Messing with his codes like that? Jazz's past is amazing, truly. And how he and Counter Shift met is an awesome idea! I hope Jazz and this Prowl work things out.
I am loving your style of writing and this whole verse! I really hope we get see more of it! ^^

the_lost_robot February 2 2013, 22:05:41 UTC

It is highly likely you'll read more about Zoom-Zoom, he has eaten my headspace completely and won't leave me alone....

tainry February 1 2013, 21:32:32 UTC

Bwahaha! Brat indeed, but at least he means well. ;D

the_lost_robot February 1 2013, 21:36:00 UTC

Zoom-Zoom loves to drive Jazz up the wall. And just a couple of minutes ago, my brain came up with an additional scene for this thing as to why this whole Jazz-Zoom-Zoom mentorship thing is so important.

silberstreif February 2 2013, 00:55:04 UTC

Very cute and horrifying fluff. Like the reason why Jazz struggles with Prowl... I imagine that the amount of violation that forces a bot to rewrite his own core programs has to be staggering. Not even mentioning the little fact of the spark sync...

the_lost_robot February 2 2013, 01:06:36 UTC

I'd initially devised the whole thing as just Jazz not having a chance to figure out who he wanted to be before getting into a really deep relationship with Prowl Mark I, which he then resented Prowl Mark III for. But then plot happened and things got really deep and messed up.

I blame Zoom-Zoom for making this fluffy. I was trying to write a depressing and dark conversation and he just. kept. interrupting. I seriously couldn't stop him. He bickers constantly with Jazz inside my head.

silberstreif February 2 2013, 21:14:41 UTC

When the plot decides to do its own thing, more often then not it becomes better... ;)
Zoom-Zoom is a great character. I've never heard of him before, so I'm loving him. :D He's like... the cosmic retribution to Jazz's behaviour in many other fanfics.

the_lost_robot February 2 2013, 21:54:06 UTC

Zoom-Zoom I think existed as a Binaltech toy only, he never made it into any series. I stumbled upon him on Tf-wiki here: http://tfwiki.net/wiki/Zoom-Zoom
As you can see, I completely high-jacked his non-existent personality. I was thinking using the name as one of Jazz's aliases. But as things darkened with Counter-Shift, I needed a balance to keep Jazz going off the deep end.
And yes, he does seem like cosmic retribution. Immature!Jazz can drive me a little nuts sometimes. Zoom-Zoom is my response.

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