OOC; Crit Post

[the_lavster]

Welcome to my HMD post. :D Uh, I consider myself still relatively new to playing Lavi, so any criticism is appreciated. If you think I suck, I'd prefer to not be outright flamed; just give me advice on how you think I can improve, and I'll do my best to apply it. ♥

Feel free to also comment here for plot purposes or with any questions you might have.

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