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FLYBOYS FLAMETASTIC FANFICTION ENTRY: HUMOR

Sep 01, 2008 19:42

Title: The Kid Who Couldn't Catch A Break
Author: Celia (apathyxurgency)
Summary: Pool mayhem. Archie's innocence being destroyed almost. Visually, anyway. Not physically.
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: This is fiction!
Author's Notes: Lol what sparked my inspiration for this story in the first place was the simple image of Michael throwing David into a pool ( Read more... )

contest entry: humor, fanfic: pg-13

Comments 55

cherrymaryberry September 2 2008, 00:08:21 UTC

ROFL!!!!!! Soooo funny!! Poor Archie!!

apathyxurgency September 2 2008, 00:14:25 UTC

XD <33 His poor virgin eyes..

sarahscrazy4dc September 2 2008, 00:17:52 UTC

awww poor little archie....i just wanna stick him in my pocket and keep him forever and ever...lol

i love this though, so cute :)

apathyxurgency September 2 2008, 00:20:22 UTC

XD You could protect him from all of the improper Mavid antics happening on the bus.

Thank you very much! :D

micheleeeex September 2 2008, 00:29:59 UTC

LMAO. POOR ARCHIE & HIS POOR VIRGIN EYES. XDD

P.S. YAY FOR A FIC THAT TAKES PLACE IN JERSEY CAUSE WE RULE! LOLOL

apathyxurgency September 2 2008, 00:55:28 UTC

XD IT HAD TO BE DONE!

LOL! THIS IS MY SECOND FIC THAT TAKES PLACE IN JERSEY.

WHAT CAN I SAY. I LIKE IT HERE.

THANKS FOR THE COMMENT! <33

phantompoptart September 2 2008, 00:34:54 UTC

LMAO. This was hilarious! Poor Archie.

apathyxurgency September 2 2008, 00:56:06 UTC

XD Hehehe thank you!

emo_bangs September 2 2008, 00:48:16 UTC

Archie scaring and Mavid making out! My two favorite things! Brilliant!

I was waiting for mikey to pull him into the pool. Yay for soaking wet Mavid. Absolutely love the ending!

Great job! <333

apathyxurgency September 2 2008, 00:56:51 UTC

Lmao! I'm glad you liked this! Thank you soo much!