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Jul 10, 2011 10:08


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FILL: Semper Fidelis, 2/2 riventhorn September 18 2011, 05:07:08 UTC
Getting his neck kissed made Esca go boneless, and he clung to Marcus’s shoulders, tilting his head back. Marcus managed to work his leg in between Esca’s, so he could rub against him. He ripped Esca’s shirt out of his jeans, found his hot stomach and the hard knobs of his spine.

Esca groaned his name, long and loud.

“You gotta be quiet,” Marcus said and smothered him in a rough kiss.

Esca jerked frantically at his belt, and then yelped when Marcus accidentally stepped on his toe with one of his heavy black combat boots.

“Shit, sorry,” Marcus whispered, almost laughing because what the fuck was he doing?

“Marcus, here, here,” Esca hissed at him and dug into his satchel, pulling out some lube and a condom.

“Oh, Christ.” He fumbled for them wide-eyed. “You really need it, huh? Carrying this around with you.”

“Always be prepared.” Esca grinned. “Isn’t that what your motto is?”

“Always faithful, you idiot.” He unbuckled his heavy belt and set it down, then unzipped his fly. “How many fingers you need?”

“Mmm, just the one. Not a lot to do out here, you know?”

“Fuck.” He pulled out his cock, let Esca look at it while he imagined Esca lying in bed, fingering himself. And then he reached out and undid Esca’s jeans and pushed them down.

“That nice?” Esca teased, stroking himself, thumbing back his foreskin to reveal the shiny pink head of his cock.

“Yeah,” Marcus gritted. “Now turn the fuck around.”

Esca laughed, low. “You gonna make me?”

“Oh, I’ll make you, you want it like that.” And he grabbed Esca’s shoulders and turned him around, then set his teeth against his shoulder, getting the cotton of his t-shirt damp.

When he slid a slick finger into him, Esca gave a startled, aroused cry.

“What did I tell you about being quiet?” Marcus chided. It was hot in the shed, and Esca was hot around his finger, and he could feel sweat trickling down his chest. He worked his finger in deeper.

“You gonna do it or what?” Esca demanded, and Marcus pulled out fast, made him sob in his throat while he put on the condom.

“There,” he murmured, fitting the head of his cock against Esca and slowly pushing forward. “How does that feel, huh?”

“So good. So fucking good. Jesus.” And Esca kept muttering, getting louder and louder, and finally Marcus clapped a hand over his mouth just as he drew back and then jolted forward hard.

“Told you to keep your mouth shut,” he whispered in Esca’s ear as he fucked him. His palm was sweaty, and Esca was panting wetly against it, sometimes grazing it with ragged teeth.

It was barely a couple of minutes before his long thrusts were turning into short, frantic hip-rolls. He took his hand off Esca’s mouth so that he could press against his shoulders and hold him steady against the wall while he pounded into him, finally stilling and letting his orgasm pulse out, all liquid and heavy.

He slumped against Esca, trying to get his breath, listening while Esca finished himself off with a few muffled whimpers before quieting underneath him. Marcus rubbed his chin against Esca’s hair and petted the back of his neck. He dropped a kiss there, fast and gentle.

They fixed their clothes in silence. And then Marcus stabbed Esca’s chest with his finger. “You put one word of this in an article…”

“Like I would do that-shit, Marcus.” Esca shook his head. “I’m going to find you a beer, that’s what I’m going to do. And you’re going to take a shower.”

“Right,” he mumbled, running his thumb in an unsteady line around the rim of his helmet.

Esca sighed and nudged Marcus’s boot with his toe. “You think I’m going to let you go so easy? After that fuck?”

It made him laugh and blush, suddenly shy. “Maybe not?”

“Maybe not,” Esca replied and let his hand rest against Marcus’s, just for a second.

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Re: FILL: Semper Fidelis, 2/2 ladytiferet September 18 2011, 05:19:16 UTC
Oh god. I had to re-read it twice to calm down enough to be able to form semi-coherent sentences 0o I'll let you know that it's 7 am here and I couldn't go to sleep not reading it and now I probably won't fall asleep because my imagination went into a serious overdrive :D
You're the best at what you do, and what you do is freaking hot, to paraphrase Wolverine :D

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Re: FILL: Semper Fidelis, 2/2 riventhorn September 18 2011, 05:28:57 UTC
I need to stop keeping you awake, lol! :)

And thank you so much for such a lovely comment!

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Re: FILL: Semper Fidelis, 2/2 coeurdesoleil September 18 2011, 08:56:00 UTC
HNNNNGHH
That was insanely hot! (and then in the the final lines, really sweet).

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Re: FILL: Semper Fidelis, 2/2 riventhorn September 18 2011, 16:27:57 UTC
Thank you! Lol, I can't keep the fluff from intruding. :D

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Re: FILL: Semper Fidelis, 2/2 poziomeczka September 18 2011, 13:08:37 UTC
I HAVEN'T EVEN READ THIS YET AND I ALREADY FEEL LIKE I SHOULD GO AND CHANGE MY PANTS.

This Reverend agrees that more is indeed the merrier.

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Re: FILL: Semper Fidelis, 2/2 poziomeczka September 18 2011, 13:24:49 UTC
I HAVE READ THIS WITH MY MOUTH WIDE OPEN. *WIDE* OPEN.

I CAN'T CLOSE IT JUST YET.

OH MY SWEET BUGGERING GOD. THIS IS JUST. OH MY GOD. TITS-UP WONDERFUL.

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Re: FILL: Semper Fidelis, 2/2 riventhorn September 18 2011, 16:27:13 UTC
Do I earn an indulgence for this? :D

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Re: FILL: Semper Fidelis, 2/2 poziomeczka September 18 2011, 16:29:48 UTC
I hope so. We have some medals to distribute I think.

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Re: FILL: Semper Fidelis, 2/2 riventhorn September 18 2011, 17:07:52 UTC
Lol! Although really, CAPSLOCK benedictions from the Reverends is reward enough :)

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Re: FILL: Semper Fidelis, 2/2 katie_andrew September 19 2011, 02:39:33 UTC
Esca programing playlists for Marcus, the sound of gunfire never leaving Marcus, how do you fit all these details of a world into such a small amount of words? You are so amazing. ♥!

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Re: FILL: Semper Fidelis, 2/2 riventhorn September 19 2011, 16:13:50 UTC
Thank you so much!! ♥♥

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Re: FILL: Semper Fidelis, 2/2 awarrington September 19 2011, 16:43:36 UTC
This was a wonderful piece - you managed to fit so much in, in so few words.

The tension was almost palpable throughout - Marcus so keyed up after his combat and then the encounter with Esca. I loved the way Esca had been worming himself into Marcus' affections unobtrusively by entertaining him and being there for him.

The encounter, when it finally came, was so hot. I love how despite being so needy and desperate, Marcus still took time to kiss Esca's neck, and how Esca couldn't keep quiet until Marcus clamped a hand over his mouth - brilliant!

This was a wonderful piece - thank you! ♥

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Re: FILL: Semper Fidelis, 2/2 riventhorn September 20 2011, 00:15:13 UTC
Thank you for the lovely comment! I always struggle with providing descriptions/background and so I really enjoy these short pwp bits where I don't really have to. But I'm glad you felt the set-up was still good. :D

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Re: FILL: Semper Fidelis, 2/2 originalpuck September 19 2011, 22:50:05 UTC
And he had listened quietly on that one cold night when they were lying side by side in the dirt, Marcus’s gun a black barrier between them, when Marcus had talked, given voice to some of the things that ate away at him. The next morning, Esca’s smile had been exactly the same.

This part just kills me with how wonderful and sweet and heartbreaking it is. The whole piece is amazing: the sex is so hot, and then the end is so sweet. Love it!

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Re: FILL: Semper Fidelis, 2/2 riventhorn September 20 2011, 00:12:47 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked that bit--it's always a little hard to provide just the right amount of background details before rushing on to the porn. And yeah, I can't avoid the fluff. :)

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