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The Naughty List, PG-13, Bill/Gustav, 1/1

Sep 08, 2013 09:46

Title: The Naughty List
Author: ???
Pairing(s): Bill/Gustav
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I don’t own these boys, and I’m making no profit from this story.
Warnings: Lots of fluff, some good-natured picking on Bill
Summary: One sheet of paper is all it takes to put Gustav on Bill’s Naughty List, but will it be enough to break them up for good?
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rating: pg13/12, pairing: bill/gustav, fest: fqf_2013

Comments 13

steinsgrrl September 9 2013, 01:27:52 UTC

This was cute! I really enjoyed their characters, especially Bill. I am nice. I am a fucking sweetheart. Love it. Thanks for sharing this!

zeph317toho September 16 2013, 01:49:47 UTC

Thank you so much for reading! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Dear Bill would always insist he's a sweetheart, I'm sure, and it's all true, right? ;D Thank you, my dear! <3

kseenaa September 10 2013, 18:40:56 UTC

Now that was AWESOME! :-D All around! So sweet and cute with an edge of seriousness. :-) I loved every single word of it. You wrote them so true to character, from what we know of them, that it rang like a very possible scenario, in away. Awesome. All around awesome!!

zeph317toho September 16 2013, 01:51:10 UTC

Aw, thank you so, so much! :D Your comment lit me up, seriously. That was the best compliment I could have gotten about the characters. I'm really happy you enjoyed it, and thank you for such a lovely comment! *hugs*

gajastar September 11 2013, 21:19:10 UTC

Con #4 was my absolute favourite. :D

zeph317toho September 16 2013, 01:53:21 UTC

I hope it made you laugh! :D I would love to make Bill's cackle my ringtone, but I'm afraid it would make the dog howl and small children cry every time the phone rings. xD

zukosphoenix September 11 2013, 22:52:22 UTC

Your hair is- I never thought- It’s always been like another member of the band,” Gustav blurted out.

It is. Its like the fifth Beatle!

Love you bby and the story too!

zeph317toho September 16 2013, 01:55:06 UTC

Thank you again for the last-minute beta, my dear! <3

I'm so glad you enjoyed the story and that line. That was one of my favorites because that's the way I've always seen Bill's hair. I swear it gets more media attention than Georg and Gustav combined! Poor Gs! xD

zukosphoenix September 16 2013, 10:56:17 UTC

No problem, hon...and you are always funny and great to read. <3

dayastjoy September 19 2013, 07:50:34 UTC

Thank you so much for sharing this, it was a really good read and hilarious; I love the dialogue:

“First of all,” Bill leaned down close to his face, “what the fuck do you mean I’m acting all nice and it’s not like myself? I am nice. I am a fucking sweetheart.”

OMG, classic! I can so imagine the real Bill saying something like this; incredibly vain but undeniably adorable hahaha

(I wish he would shave his beard for real; I miss pretty Bill)

zeph317toho September 25 2013, 20:03:38 UTC

Thank you very, very much for your kind words! I'm really excited that you read this and enjoyed it. Thank you for finding it funny!

I totally agree with you--I can picture Bill being just cocky enough that it would be adorable! And I'm with you about the beard. I don't like facial hair on men when it hides such a perfect face. I hope it's a phase he grows out of soon!

Thank you again very much for commenting! <3