challenge fic

Sep 08, 2009 17:52



Rating Wanted: PG-13 or higher
What missing scene do you want to see? An internal, expanded moment between the time when Jetfire sees Optimus revived and kills himself so Optimus can use his parts.
Three things you want in your story: How time ceases to appertain within a deem communication link between giant alien robots. Respect rather than ridicule for Jetfire's age and origin. DO WANT an exchange of pleasure, "chaste" though it may be without physical contact.
Three things you do NOT want in your story: I don't mean for a total rewrite of what happened in the movie; I only propose that what we saw wasn't all that happened. ;D

Author notes: I’ve written Optimus before but Jetfire proved to be a huge challenge. Simply because I don’t know that much about his character (other than from the ROTF novels/movie). Hopefully the requestor enjoys this. After writing this I’m quite taken with Jetfire and may write for him again. I did mess around with what was shown in the film, having Sam revive Optimus before having Jetfire die, allowing me to expand on a few plot points.

Title: Second Chances

Author: Optimus_life

Rating: R(spark sex)

Pairing: Optimus Prime/Jetfire

Universe: set during ROTF

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Time. For decades (as humans reckoned those things) Jetfire had been alone. It seemed like a miracle, when that scrawny fragging human boy showed up. Turning his world on it’s aft inside of 48 hours. Not wanting to waste any of it and figuring a mech had to take things into his own hands. After all Primus only helped those who helped themselves, he playfully nudged his hip joint against Optimus’s. The two mech’s sat in the shadow of the Great Pyramid of Giza. Literally at its base, taking in the spectacular sunset and enjoying each other’s company. Savoring the calm before the storm, dawn would bring the final battle and any down time was a precious commodity not to be wasted. “You have been accepted and forgiven for your past actions as a Con. Thank you for helping get Samuel to me.” Optimus said, draping an arm over Jetfire’s shoulders. Hoping to impart a measure of warmth and comfort; the seeker leaned into the offered embrace. While allowing his fingers to ghost over the Prime’s chest plates, when he was not rebuffed he continued. “Nice to be wanted after so long, it does a spark good.” Jetfire said, his beard twitched as he thought about all that had brought the two of them to this place. Since awakening earlier that day, Optimus had been drawn to the black colored seeker in a way he could not explain. There wasn’t much time (or energy) for a proper bonding but the old feelings had resurfaced. Jetfire felt he’d known Optimus for a long time, in fact they had. Sharing a brief tryst before the seeker was sent to Earth and virtual isolation. What had passed between them long ago remained fresh and bright, it was an unexpected surprise. He couldn’t give Optimus much but he would give him whatever time they had together. A happy memory to carry with him for forever.

Darkness had fallen, bringing with it a break from the intense desert heat and giving the mech’s privacy. “Beautiful” Optimus whispered as he pinned Jetfire to the ground; his chest plates opening in eager anticipation. The seeker thrust his fingers into the Prime’s spark chamber, stroking and coaxing. Gradual working Optimus closer to over load, they both fed off the others emotions and lust. “Harder, faster.” Jetfire gasped, Optimus smiled. Knowing the seeker enjoyed it quick and fierce when it came to their coupling. He was more than glad to oblige the request; he thrust quickly in and out of Jetfire’s spark chamber.  He sank his hands to the wrists than tugging. Bringing both of them to a swift over load, the Prime savored the smell of burnt plasma. The two lay together, comfortable in each other’s presence. “You restored my faith in life.” Jetfire said slowly, unsure of believing the words he had just spoken. Especially after being alone for so long. “Regardless of what happens tomorrow.” Optimus said tracing the other’s face with his hand. “Know you are loved. You gave me my second chance.” The two slept till dawn, bodies interlaced. Their Sparks at peace.

author: optimus_life, method: spark, jetfire, optimus prime, continuity: bay movies, rated: r/m

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