The Stars Are Sending You A Sign

Apr 18, 2012 16:49

Title: The Stars Are Sending You A Sign
Characters: Ayani, Wash, Taylor, Lucas
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 12184
Genre: drama
Spoilers: season 1
Summary: A broken woman without a home tries to find a place she can be free finally.
Author's Note:  (stolen from sky_kiss): 'from the original draft of Terra Nova in which Nathaniel was a psycho with a god complex named ( Read more... )

author: zapf_chancery, authors: t-z, character: alicia washington, character: nathaniel taylor, rating: pg-13, word count: 10000-19999, character: others, character: lucas taylor

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inu_midoriko April 19 2012, 02:15:12 UTC
........*evils grins* I have been waiting ALL DAY to do this. You best bet your ass I'm guna take my sweet time in bombarding you with MY UTTER LOVE AND ADORATION AND FANGIRL. I'M TRYING MY DAMN BEST TO KEEP FANGIRL NEL AT BAY BUT SHE'S NOT LISTENING! SHE'S ESCAPING...ESCAPING! GAH! SHE'S ARISEN! ARISEN AND HERE AND VERY MUCH WISHING THERE WAS ANOTHER FONT SIZE UP TO SHOW YOU HOW MUCH SHE LOVES YOU.

OH MY GAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWD THE FIRST SCENE. THE FIRST SCENE. I WAS ALL 'O.O OMG SHE'S THROUGH. SHE'S THROUGH! GOD DAMN MY JOY, SHE'S THROUGH THE PORTAL! *fist pump!*' And then Liz was there and then Ayani was all 'Omg lolz, how rude of me, I'm a Taylor, bitch.' and Liz was all 'O.o Liz...*in head* OMG THIS IS NOT POSSIBLE' BUT IT WAS!

AND THEN THERE WAS WASH AND TAYLOR AND SHE WAS ALL 'YO DUDE, THATS HOW YOUR AYANI' AND HE WAS ALL '*GRUMPY FACE* But stepping out of fangirl mode a moment, I just wanna say that it was slightly sad cuz she's supposed to be dead and hearing that she's alive regardless of that person being your person or not, woulda had to have been killer on his heart.

AND OMG MY HEART. MY HEART. SHE WANTED TO SEE ALICIA EVEN THOUGH HER ALICIA WAS HER HUSBAND'S MISTRESS AND AND AND IT WAS SO SAD. GOD. THE CAMERA RECORDING WAS JUST ALL 'OH LOLZ, NEL'S WEAK TODAY. GET 'ER!' Because T.T Frayani! she was so innocent and all she wanted was affection in the form of awesome and she didn;t get it and Frank was scary to her even tho he didn;t raise a hand to her T.T.

I LOVE FRANK BUT I WANT TO PUNCH HIM IN THE FACE.

But on the upside, WASH WON. SHE FINALLY WON SOMETHING. OMG. IT WASN'T IN ANY WAY SEXUAL BUT SHE STILL WON. THIS IS A STEP IN THE RIGHT DIRECTION.

And then and then AND THEN FRAYANI BEING ALL CUTE AND NERVOUS AND HESITANT AND JUST...I WANT TO HUG HER. I WANT TO HUG HER SO BAD. OMG. WOMAN YOU'RE A GENIUS. WASH WANTS TO TAKE CARE OF HER. GAWD. THE FRIENDSHIP BETWEEN THEM EVEN IF IT WAS BETWEEN TWO DIFFERENT PEOPLE IS STILL SO GUH!

THE RECORDING. GOD DAMN. YOU KNOW HOW TO MAKE MY HEART ACHE. GUH. JUST... FRAYANI, NEXT TIME KEEP YOUR LEGS CLOSED. BUT BUT BUT BUT OMG. DUDE. OMG. WASH TOOK HER TO HER HOME AND THEN FRAYANI WAS HAPPY AND THEN I SMILED FOR HER BECAUSE JESUS MOTHER OF LORD. THIS WOMAN DESERVES TO BE HAPPY. SO HAPPY. SO HAPPY THAT WASH'S HAPPY NEEDS TO PALE IN COMPARISON.

FRAYANI, YOU DO NOT NEED TO BE USEFUL IN ORDER TO ROCK IT AT HOME. YOU SILLY WOMAN. I am SO happy Wash was all 'Yo bitch, sit the frak down.' AND I ADORED. ADORED. JUST GOD DAMN LOVED IT WHEN WASH GOT FURIOUS ABOUT AYANI'S 'LOLZ, I MADE U BREAKFAST AFTER YOU SCREWED MY HUSBAND' AND THEN I LOVED HOW SHE GOT MAD ABOUT AYANI NOT FIGHTING HARD ENOUGH AND I JUST. EVERY SCENE YOU DO IS LIKE MAGIC. IT'S LIKE, 'OMG HI GUYS, I'M GOING TO BE AWESOME FOR YOU RIGHT NOW, NO BIGGIE.'

Oh Ayani, OH AYANI. You should have just left the crazy ass Lucas alone. BUT ALAS, YOU DID NOT AND NOW LOOK AT WHERE YOU ARE. YOU ARE NOW LILY WILCOX AND SONLESS. I did get very sad when Wash yelled at her though :(. Cuz then Ayani was sad and thought Wash hated her and then JIM LOLOLOL THAT MAN AND HIS WAYS. I love it, I love HIM. He makes everything so... much better :). On another note, I AM SO PROUD OF AYANI FOR USING A GUN. OMG. EVEN IF IT WAS JUST TO STUN. SHE USED IT.

And although I do not approve of Lucas, At all. I am grateful he saved her. BUT STILL. HE GOT WHAT WAS COMING TO HIM. AND AND AND AND AND AND I SAW WHAT YOU DID THERE, MA'AM. YES, INDEED I DID. AWT LEGIT. AYANI WITH WASH IN THE MIDDLE AND TAYLOR ON THE OTHER SIDE OF WASH. IT WAS BRILLIANCE. I FIST PUMPED AND WIGGLED IN MY CHAIR. IT WAS A VICTORY WIGGLE. OBVIOUSLY.

But yes, Zapf, my dear hilarious friend, do not doubt this story, for it is truly wonderful and beautiful in that it shows the story of a broken woman coming to this TN to get a second chance. And you wrote it so fabulously and everything was so clear. The emotions, the turmoil, the happiness and contentment (omg Nathaniel and Ayani's kiss <3. I loved it. I wont lie) So yes. dont think this sucks cuz it truly is fantastic. I DO NOT CAP LIKE A TARD FOR JUST ANYONE OR ANY STORY.

:D Nel loves you!

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