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valhalla37 April 9 2010, 12:16:47 UTC
Oh, I just love this! Such great perspectives from both the women, and some wonderful missing moments. I love the links you draw between both of them, and how their island connections and their children's fates sort of bring them together. Fantastic!

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tellshannon815 April 9 2010, 23:02:05 UTC
Thank you, I'm actually impressed you read it all! Widmore's section's getting way out of hand too! Glad you liked these missing pieces.

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franza April 10 2010, 11:30:04 UTC
Yes! I especially enjoyed Eloise's turmoil, its so sad, and Jeanette tried her best. I love the bit where they are saying goodbye, knowing they will never see their children again. Great job X

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tellshannon815 April 11 2010, 18:54:41 UTC
Thank you, glad you liked this, and impressed you read it all!

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