It's your STYLE of writing and he's all high and mighty up on his horse.
The way you're writing is how you intend it to be. You give away only what you want to, your direct the reader where you want them to look, you command the details. He can suck it.
And also... I LOVE the names. So fuck him.
Oh, and I am beyond jealous of your writing style. It's smooth, flowy, and effortless. Bv
Baaaw thankies :> A good boost right after being bummed out, how lovely <3
The names I picked out special so that they reflect each character (or at least how they were originally supposed to be) i.e. Valda means ruler, Myra means invention, Kasmira means destroyer of peace (lol i had to take that one)
D: How can you be jealous of my writing style when yours is so epicly epic! That Sunstreaker Primus story had me on the verge of tears Q~Q So much emotion patched into it
And they sound good. They meld perfectly with the story and they sound perfectly at home there.
Because that only happens SOMETIMES. D: My writing style is inconsistent depending on how emotional I am at the time of writing it. YOURS stays consistent and wonderful. D:
xD My style is consistent mostly because I'm always writing while in the same places, with the same things going on in the background, in the same mood (at school during tok, eng, sometimes math, aaand hist)
Though for certain chapters I hope I can draw on the spontanious emotionalness that you can :[ I've got some chappies in the not too far off future that were so sad that I can get a tad upset just thinking about them
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It's your STYLE of writing and he's all high and mighty up on his horse.
The way you're writing is how you intend it to be. You give away only what you want to, your direct the reader where you want them to look, you command the details.
He can suck it.
And also... I LOVE the names. So fuck him.
Oh, and I am beyond jealous of your writing style. It's smooth, flowy, and effortless. Bv
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The names I picked out special so that they reflect each character (or at least how they were originally supposed to be)
i.e. Valda means ruler, Myra means invention, Kasmira means destroyer of peace (lol i had to take that one)
D: How can you be jealous of my writing style when yours is so epicly epic! That Sunstreaker Primus story had me on the verge of tears Q~Q So much emotion patched into it
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And they sound good.
They meld perfectly with the story and they sound perfectly at home there.
Because that only happens SOMETIMES. D:
My writing style is inconsistent depending on how emotional I am at the time of writing it.
YOURS stays consistent and wonderful. D:
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Though for certain chapters I hope I can draw on the spontanious emotionalness that you can :[ I've got some chappies in the not too far off future that were so sad that I can get a tad upset just thinking about them
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