Fanfic - Fool's Paradise (part three)

[teacandles]

Not so sure that I like this part, but it's something.

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Comments

[ileliberte]

There was something so haunting and sad about the atmosphere in this one. I loved how you got across all the things that we do know happened and all the things that Kurt's afraid of, but through Jeff's eyes so it was done without explicitly saying anything. I love random little friendship moments so I really liked the way you ended the chapter.

[teacandles]

Thank you, dear. ♥ Little friendship moments are lovely, so I like to include them when I can. I'm glad this chapter came off well.

[hitchin]

N'aw. Go Jeff! It's interesting to see things from another perspective.

[teacandles]

Thanks. ♥ This one's been interesting to write because I'm trying to go for a more omniscient view on this than 'Visions.' Jeff is quickly becoming one of my favorite characters to write.

[teacandles]

Thank you so much. ♥ I'm really liking writing Jeff, and he's got a pretty large part to play in this.

[dani_elizabethx]

As soon as Jeff made up his mind to go for a walk I knew he was going to run into Kurt some how...

Ohh mann...

[teacandles]

I'll admit it was a might bit obvious that Jeff would run into Kurt, since he's such a minor character in canon. I didn't know he was going to play such a large role in this story, to be honest.

Thank you so much for reading this. I'm really flattered that you sought this out after reading the other one. ♥