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yohana_lestari December 9 2016, 06:29:33 UTC
OMG I LOVE IT!!!! XDDD
that's it ahahahhahaahahahahahaha

no, jk xD
'Well, your grammar does notably suck.' < this, i laugh so hard on this part, he isn't better than ryochan *pointing at his tshirt's goods for their next live tour xD
so, it was their 1st kiss? you should make it more romantic, but i love it better this way ahahaha

thank you for this, this one really make my day <3

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lalois December 10 2016, 17:25:17 UTC
>> so, it was their 1st kiss? you should make it more romantic
Yeah, I thought the same, how can you waste a first kiss like this XD?
But I found it nonethelessly cute, so I didn't change the lines ^^
Thanks for commenting ~~

Do we really have to talk about that concert tshirt? I really wonder what was in Ohkura's mind to come up with something like this O_O

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rainbowdots888 December 10 2016, 18:04:10 UTC
Aaaaah. You DID post something and didn't see it right away. I actually checked this page on the 8th xDD

IT. IS. SUPER. CUTE.

I was going all "aw" reading it ! I'm not going to say that Ohkura is a poor boy, being kissed by Ryo for his first time with a man... darling <3

>> "No tongue, though," the drummer said afterwards, once he had opened his lids again.
Ryo smiled at him.
"Wanna have some?"

YES PLEASE.

It's very short but I really liked it. I can really imagine them in this situation <3

Thanks for posting it !!!

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lalois December 11 2016, 21:38:33 UTC
>> I actually checked this page on the 8th
Ow... Well I always have such bad timing, really, my whole life could be summed up with "bad timing" XD

Anyway, I'm glad you found it cute! I do, also, and to be honest when I was rummaging in my fic folder to find something very short to read, I stumbled upon this and wondered why I had never posted that before (because it was too short, I suppose)!
Thanks for commenting <3

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mikinyan December 30 2016, 15:39:59 UTC
I love it xD

Imagine torn learning a new language... xDDDDD

How torn's first kisses did you write? Random question xD

Kisses~ *chu* ^3^

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lalois December 30 2016, 21:31:28 UTC
Hi!!!
So glad to have you in here <3
Yeah torn with learning languages might be like having a new hilarious corner at K8 Chronicle (ow I wiiiiiiiiiiiiiish <3) ahahahhahaha!

>> How torn's first kisses did you write?
Do you mean how many times or which kind of first kisses I wrote about them?
Honestly... dunno XD
There was a very long chaptered 8Uppers fic I wrote in Italian in which Ace and Johnny had a few "first kisses attempts", before they could admit what was going on with them. That was totally fun to write XD
But talking about "first kisses" means having a story to tell, and for one-shot stories that's more difficult for me because in one-shots, for me, TORN are often into an already established relationship <3
Can I also ask... Are you curious on some particular "first kiss" situation? Would you like me to try to write it :O?

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