Comments | tattooedloyalty: Magazine 2; Round 2

tattooedloyalty

Jun 27, 2009 02:35

I have taken it upon myself to accept your challenge, BRaWLDOS:
( Challenge Fulfilled. )

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youresoshort June 27 2009, 07:15:43 UTC

tattooedloyalty June 27 2009, 07:16:43 UTC

You don't appreciate my work, sir?

youresoshort June 27 2009, 07:18:57 UTC

I think your ending needs to be improved, Lieutenant.

tattooedloyalty June 27 2009, 07:20:00 UTC

My ending enforces discipline for an unsavory action.

youresoshort June 27 2009, 07:28:57 UTC

It's a little bit too depressing.

upyourscolonel June 27 2009, 07:31:30 UTC

I thought it was lovely.

youresoshort June 27 2009, 07:38:11 UTC

upyourscolonel June 27 2009, 07:43:31 UTC

Although I don't think yellow is your color.

youresoshort June 27 2009, 07:49:14 UTC

You're the expert, Ed.

upyourscolonel June 27 2009, 07:54:01 UTC

On yellow?

tattooedloyalty June 27 2009, 07:32:13 UTC

There have been worse.

youresoshort June 27 2009, 07:39:23 UTC

I think you should stick to the military, Lieutenant.

tattooedloyalty June 27 2009, 07:40:17 UTC

Shooting down my plans to become an author, sir?

youresoshort June 27 2009, 07:48:08 UTC

I'm merely looking out for your best interests.

tattooedloyalty June 27 2009, 07:48:52 UTC

Of course, sir.

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