So got a bit more done last night - it's going pretty slowly but I'm just trying to be clean and methodical with this - rendering water in motion I think has been on of the most time consuming elements I've ever had to draw, though as I said I'm just being methodical and lightly pencilling, peeling back and then going in with tighter line work. Redrew Spider-man slightly, and am pretty pleased with the bloke in the foreground so far, I figured a re-active shot was a bit more dynamic than a bloke staring and watching. Had some issues sorting out the scale in perspective terms but think it's ok now. Hopefully have more done tonight!