Trying to build momentum
Aloha! Well I've been slack in a fairly large way the last two weeks (hell, 2 months) at trying to get anything done. I'm currently starting work on a Spiderman sequential (trying to take it back to something I always thought I would enjoy) so I've posted the script for the first page below:
Devil’s Advocate
Spiderman property of Marvel
Story by Ielle Palmer 2006
PAGE ONE, Six Panels
Panel One: Evening - Fullshot of Spiderman smashing into a park water fountain, kicking up a huge spray every which way. Various people nearby are looking up alarmed.
CAPTION: “He’s not a menace!”
SPIDEY: Oofff!
Panel Two: Medium LS of DOC OC using one of his mechanical arms to lift Spidey up by the jaw and shake him.
CAPTION: “Liz… he’s just misunderstood.”
CAPTION 2: “Ugh, here we go. Harry, make her stop.”
Panel Three: LS of Doc tossing Spidey away towards some benches.
CAPTION: “Oh no, I’m not getting involved, this is between you two.”
Panel Four: CU of Spidey’s thrusting his hands outward, his webs spring outward.
CAPTION: “He’s a freak MJ…”
Panel Five: WA of Spidey. He has sling shoot himself around a lamp-post and is heading back at DOC OC (MS of DOC in the foreground, ready to fight) his foot outstretched so that it’ll be the first thing to hit DOC.
CAPTION: “…They say he’s the reason all these other nutjobs are popping up all over town…”
Panel Six: CU of Spidey’s foot connecting with Doc’s jaw, smashing his face sideways.
CAPTION: “...for godsake, the man’s killed people!”
Okay, I thought I had the thumbnail picture, but here's the layed out board so far, with some more detail shots. I'm gonna try and keep y'all up to date on this one, as this is really me trying to reignite my enthusiasm for comic book artwork.
Drew this whilst watching a movie a couple of nights ago - a fine example of piss poor planning as I've started to drop a background in and it just looks distinctly average and rubbish. Really trying to work on a much cleaner line style though.
Loads of other stuff has been going on, work's been busy and gymnastics has gone really well - landed the first somersault of our group last week and we're now moving on to more advanced floor work (we've got a 2 week easter break) as well as more vaulting and bars. Rreally enjoying it - though currently dragging my body kicking and screaming with that and yoga to a usable level of flexiblity!
Oh, and ResEvil5 kicks ASS!
Devil’s Advocate
Spiderman property of Marvel
Story by Ielle Palmer 2006
PAGE ONE, Six Panels
Panel One: Evening - Fullshot of Spiderman smashing into a park water fountain, kicking up a huge spray every which way. Various people nearby are looking up alarmed.
CAPTION: “He’s not a menace!”
SPIDEY: Oofff!
Panel Two: Medium LS of DOC OC using one of his mechanical arms to lift Spidey up by the jaw and shake him.
CAPTION: “Liz… he’s just misunderstood.”
CAPTION 2: “Ugh, here we go. Harry, make her stop.”
Panel Three: LS of Doc tossing Spidey away towards some benches.
CAPTION: “Oh no, I’m not getting involved, this is between you two.”
Panel Four: CU of Spidey’s thrusting his hands outward, his webs spring outward.
CAPTION: “He’s a freak MJ…”
Panel Five: WA of Spidey. He has sling shoot himself around a lamp-post and is heading back at DOC OC (MS of DOC in the foreground, ready to fight) his foot outstretched so that it’ll be the first thing to hit DOC.
CAPTION: “…They say he’s the reason all these other nutjobs are popping up all over town…”
Panel Six: CU of Spidey’s foot connecting with Doc’s jaw, smashing his face sideways.
CAPTION: “...for godsake, the man’s killed people!”
Okay, I thought I had the thumbnail picture, but here's the layed out board so far, with some more detail shots. I'm gonna try and keep y'all up to date on this one, as this is really me trying to reignite my enthusiasm for comic book artwork.
Drew this whilst watching a movie a couple of nights ago - a fine example of piss poor planning as I've started to drop a background in and it just looks distinctly average and rubbish. Really trying to work on a much cleaner line style though.
Loads of other stuff has been going on, work's been busy and gymnastics has gone really well - landed the first somersault of our group last week and we're now moving on to more advanced floor work (we've got a 2 week easter break) as well as more vaulting and bars. Rreally enjoying it - though currently dragging my body kicking and screaming with that and yoga to a usable level of flexiblity!
Oh, and ResEvil5 kicks ASS!