I didn't get much h/w done for that whole 6 days coz we went 'round visiting relatives + seeing new places that's been opened up and OH, spent mostly on eating ^^;;;;;
Kamijo > Leo said that yeah sure he can see lots of work being done for the eyes but it's still not detail enough @ not enough 3D =-=; And that I didn't make full use of the textures (esp. the bottom part) And some parts, it wasn't clear @ "very ambiguous", to quote him o__O; (like, the details too blended into each other already)
So a overhaul is needed, but for this he said I can take my time, don't rush, coz most importantly, it's for my portfolio.
I just hope at least, for the 2nd one, I get the style right first before redoing the first one...
I know rite =w=; But I haven't found any nice Asian refs that clicked and I was hard-pressed for time (and half the class were using famous singers for refs) so I thought to just follow and see what happens.
(well, the what happens = backfired, for me anyway =w=;)
Was too konked out last night and forgot to post the 2nd link to the other entry *ish shot ^^;;;
Saw your second post, but have nothing to say re: Alice, I think both refs are too busy and don't like either XD; Stayne's face in particular bugs me, I'd have preferred if he stood next to the Red Queen to show that he's her konco (it's like KS said, when you arrange the composition you gotta have some kind of concept).
I did the "bad washed-out ref" as well, and got the same feedback. I have no way to solve it either, especially since mine was a doll's head, it's already lacking in many facial muscles XD;
Alice > Leo showed half of today's clip on Drew Struzan, and I noticed the guy drew his compo in 5 and less figures (and about 2-3 elements, tops). I think I should simplify my thumbs further...
Leo > My 2nd assignment got rejected too today (I finished it, but turns out it was over-rendered). So now I owe him two assignments.
But he did a short demo to show how to paint properly (coz he saw I have difficulty trying to understand the style to paint it when everyone else in class have no problem at all). I'm hoping to clear his assignments backlog by this week, coz the coming new assignment is heavy.
Yea, it really sounds like you're relying too much on us and not paying attention in class ^^; What to do, I can only say, "try and get your shit together man"....
(Kamijo looks good, btw! )
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(back-dated since it was for last week)
http://tanlammy.livejournal.com/176639.html
Kamijo > Leo said that yeah sure he can see lots of work being done for the eyes but it's still not detail enough @ not enough 3D =-=;
And that I didn't make full use of the textures (esp. the bottom part)
And some parts, it wasn't clear @ "very ambiguous", to quote him o__O;
(like, the details too blended into each other already)
So a overhaul is needed, but for this he said I can take my time, don't rush, coz most importantly, it's for my portfolio.
I just hope at least, for the 2nd one, I get the style right first before redoing the first one...
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(well, the what happens = backfired, for me anyway =w=;)
Was too konked out last night and forgot to post the 2nd link to the other entry *ish shot ^^;;;
On KS, Alice and fighting visuals:
http://tanlammy.livejournal.com/176790.html
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Saw your second post, but have nothing to say re: Alice, I think both refs are too busy and don't like either XD; Stayne's face in particular bugs me, I'd have preferred if he stood next to the Red Queen to show that he's her konco (it's like KS said, when you arrange the composition you gotta have some kind of concept).
I did the "bad washed-out ref" as well, and got the same feedback. I have no way to solve it either, especially since mine was a doll's head, it's already lacking in many facial muscles XD;
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I think I should simplify my thumbs further...
Leo > My 2nd assignment got rejected too today (I finished it, but turns out it was over-rendered). So now I owe him two assignments.
But he did a short demo to show how to paint properly (coz he saw I have difficulty trying to understand the style to paint it when everyone else in class have no problem at all). I'm hoping to clear his assignments backlog by this week, coz the coming new assignment is heavy.
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