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tanarwater

Scottish fairytales hetalified

Oct 12, 2010 00:24

There was once a young lad called America, whose father ( Read more... )

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ink_clovers October 12 2010, 00:20:55 UTC

I love fairytale crossovers, they're always so cute XD. By the way, there are some parts in the story where you wrote "Jack" instead of "America" I just wanted to point that out. It was really cute though!

tanarwater October 12 2010, 06:28:18 UTC

Ah right, I'll adjust that.

Thank you though

zidane1862 October 12 2010, 02:23:55 UTC

This was so cute!! :) I can't wait until you finish your next one!!

And also... the tomato turned into a lemon at one point... just saying... and Jack... and a missing quotation mark... ok, I'm done being a grammar Nazi now...

But it was amazingly cute! (Didn't want to finish on a bad note :D )

tanarwater October 12 2010, 06:32:54 UTC

Thank you, all glitches should be sorted out. I had just read to original to remind me what the story was and in that was a Jack and a lemon

Next one should not take too long

ren_chan146 October 12 2010, 20:02:42 UTC

That surely was quite a weird fairytale, but a awesomely good one nonetheless. I had lots of fun reading it.^^

tanarwater October 12 2010, 20:18:06 UTC

Scottish fairytales never seem to be quite normal. I'm glad you liked it though