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jaemono June 2 2013, 19:19:59 UTC
And then the way Jyuni continued her way to Jaejoong after Yunho had put her down - almost killing her ;A; - and Jaejoong cradling her like that, oh my heart He could see it right from the front step, a lonely figure crawling on the ground towards him with a staggering seagull in tow.

With a simple sentence you turn me in a pool of sobbing feels! ;~~; /fifth tissue/ AISH WHO CARES WHICH ONE THIS IS, I used my blankets as tissues anyway! \ >~~~~~~~~< /

“There you are!” he exclaimed cheerily, disregarding of the rough, damp rock underneath his belly. Yunho reached him in a few seconds, crouching down, hooking his fingers under the boy’s armpits to hoist him up. The boy’s arms wound around his neck as he hummed contently. The seagull stopped crying, strutting around Yunho’s feet, pecking his bare toes curiously.

*______________.* I want a movie, please make me a movie, Eeca. When you’re going back to Korea you will contact Jae’s and Yun’s agencies and you will write them a script and they will act in this, okay? Promise? Pinky promise?

Jaejoong looked up thoughtfully, scrutinising the grey planks of the ceiling.

“I didn’t get to that part yet,” he confessed, looking at Yunho brightly. “I figured I’d better find your drowning body first, it’s my job after all.”

/squeezes Jaejoong so tightly/

Jaejoong was still missing a lot of feathers. Even so, watching him perched on the edge of Yunho’s bed, grooming his wings with nimble fingers was quite the sight. When Jaejoong extended his wings fully out, he could easily cover his whole body underneath, hiding from Yunho’s gaze.

/gazes along with Yunnie/

Yunho’s past remind me of a book I read about a man who escaped North-Korea. The world - excluding the rocky island of Yunho - reminded me of the country, too; but as it is post-apocalyptic… it might make sense it resembles North-Korea in a way…

“Can animals go to heaven, Jaejoong-ah?” he asked, voice mumbled by the fabric of Jaejoong’s coarse jumper.

“There is no heaven, Yunho-yah,” the other answered him calmly. “That’s why you have to make the most of your time here.”

Okay, this left me breathless (as if I was talking), but you made me intake fresh air and just blink at the screen (as this was the end of part 2) and omg… That was really… I don’t know. I felt a pang in my heart. As Christian, I believe in a Heaven and well, since angels have always been different and explained vaguely in the Bible, I don’t know whether to accept they are in Heaven or anywhere else. .__. Faith will always be an individualistic thing and everyone has a different view on it, that’s how God has made humans.

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jaemono June 2 2013, 19:20:45 UTC
Every evening, when he came home, Jaejoong was waiting for him, standing barefoot on the pier, Jyuni on his shoulder.

This is how the first drawing came into life! :D I hope to finish it soon! <3

With a strange kind of strength he wrenched Yunho’s head away from his hands and cradled it it between his own palms. Only then did Yunho notice that all he could see was the powerful ripple of Jaejoong’s white wings all around him. He was sheltered inside, hidden away from everything around them, in a space so small it could only accommodate him, and Jaejoong.

(…)

But what he was sure of was the warmth of Jaejoong’s palms against his cheeks and the whiteness of his wings around him. And when Jaejoong closed the distance between their mouths, breathing new air into his collapsed lungs, he let him. .
Omo……….. ;//////////; This is so precious!

And……. we have arrived at the part tears were dropping down my cheeks before they were absorbed in my blankets.

Jaejoong was already standing on the pier, at the very end of it, Jyuni at his feet. He was facing the sea when Yunho strolled down the little path from the hut. His wings were folded only halfway, and as Yunho neared the pier, they were already lifting and widening, opening up to their full width. The sight blew Yunho away every time; the way his wings pulsed, surges of energy wrecking through them until the very tips of his primary feathers.

Then, just as Yunho’s foot met the concrete surface of the pier, Jaejoong looked over his shoulder, his face lightened by a delighted smile.

Yunho instantly knew what was going to happen. He let everything he had been carrying drop on the ground as he charged forward. Jaejoong’s wings were now spread open to their maximum wingspan, and Yunho had barely enough time to take two running steps before they were beating up and down. Then, defying all laws of gravity, Jaejoong’s svelte body ascended, his speed gradually increasing.

“No no no no no Jaejoong, no!” Yunho shouted, running towards the end of the pier where the angel had taken wing, already out of his reach. “No no no no don’t go! Don’t go! No no don’t leave me! Please! Jaejoong please!”

Desperation seeping into his voice, he was barely able to stop his momentum before he sprinted right off the pier into the sea. Jyuni was standing right there, strutting around in a fidgety, unsettled way as it cried after its companion. It stepped back and forth on the edge of the pier, trying to spread its wings as well, upset by having been left behind in such a manner.

Yunho hardly paid attention to the distressed seagull as he slumped on the edge of the pier, staring after the angel who was still soaring, his speed so great he was barely a small, white bird on the sky.

“Jaejoong, please…! Jaejoong…!” he shouted for the last time before letting his head hang down. “No no no…” he spoke to himself, staring at the restless waves underneath himself. “This is not happening…”

Jyuni cried out one more time before suddenly surging forwards, wings spread as it tried to take flight as well. The first wingstrokes were a bit flabby, but it soon gained stability, crying out as it rose up with the wind, flying for the first time in five weeks.

I’m so sorry for quoting the whole thing, but oh my God, at first Yunho’s dialogues and then Jyuni being so freaking angsty and awesome, I just couldn’t hold my tears back. This. Has. Never. Happened. Before. ;__________; And I read all kinds of sad ones as I enjoy reading sad ones as the freak as I am, but this made me feel so emotional, I don’t know what you do to me but you are awesome. Really.

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jaemono June 2 2013, 19:21:08 UTC
Glancing around as if there was someone who could catch him in the act, Yunho hesitantly reached his hand towards Jaejoong’s back. Through the hole in his jumper, Yunho could see the angel’s shoulder blades where his wing bones extended outwards, and the small feathers in between his wings that continued downwards alongside his spine.

Imitating Jaejoong’s usual calming gesture, he pressed his full palm onto the down between the boy’s shoulder blades. The boy gasped, his back arching forwards as he shied away from the touch. Insistently, Yunho pressed in more, feeling the boy’s back tremble underneath his touch.

Want to draw this as well! ;A;

Jaejoong smiled at him before letting his head rest on Yunho’s shoulder, wings curling around them both.

…….. /clears throat/ this too…

Omomo, and then the part at the end! I totally didn’t expect (what did I expect, I totally didn’t even expect such a WONDERFUL story!) the part of the man! And the man cannot see Jaejoong’s wings… omo, this ended in such a cliffhanger! And I love it! Readers themselves can interpret what they think about the story! So awesomely done! ;A; /pats head/
Jaejoong smiled when Yunho realised the man couldn’t see them… Hmm… to me that can mean two things… Or Jaejoong is Yunho’s personal angel, like a guardian angel and so Yunho is the only one who can see him, or… Jaejoong chose for it himself… I mean… where did Jae exactly come from… Huuu… so mysterious, and I love it! *-*

This story will stay close to me, I’m sure of it and I will probably reread it many times! Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful piece of work! ;____;

/hugs/

P.S. I will let you know when the fanart is done! :D

And oh God, I'm so sorry for the ridiculous length of this comment (It couldn't even fit in three comments).... .___.

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jaemono June 2 2013, 19:41:15 UTC
Found the perfect gif for myself when I was reading the part when Jaejoong flew across the sky and Jyuni was moving about the edge and then started flying.

You may see the gif as following: I'm Jaejoong, that other person is my phone and as you then can see, I am tasjfklsfjierujcvxnadjaksf at my screen (and imagine tears rolling down my cheeks). \ u____u /




edit: on the other hand, I probably wouldn't look that angry... but still. :"D

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taemun June 2 2013, 20:11:01 UTC
Yeah I don't even know what to do with this comment... You will forever be my sweetest reader, I mean, an audio comment and now this :'D I love you!!!

I have been a girl scout ever since I was a little girl so nature has always been close to my heart... And since I come from a seaside city, sea has been my love all along. The state of the Baltic Sea is really horrendous too, I think it's the most polluted sea in the world >____< Writing this fic started with the state of the Baltic Sea, really... I'm glad there is someone who read this and feels strongly about these things as well :)

And seagulld for sure are the most annoying creatures ever in real life xDDD But even they deserve a chance if fics lol~

That was a beautiful metaphor you found ;u; Tbh I hadn't thought of it, but Jaejoong really is like the ugly duckling in a way...

Oh, the wings... Idek where the idea came from, i just wanted to write my own kind of angel, make the creature seem real... Not just a random person with wings. That's why I spent so much time describing him...

Hahahahaha you interrupting YunJae's moment because Jyuni was waiting on the other side of the door cracked me up so bad xDDD

I would love a movie TT_____TT But Jaejoong is too old for this role already LOL~

And Yunho's story reminded you of that book exactly because I used some of Shin Donghyuk's story as a basis for Yunho's story :) How his family was planning escape without including him and so on...

Also, even though I'm a member of the church but I'm not actually Christian, so I'm happy you didn't find any of the stuff in this offensive or anything :) I bent everything to my own will, totally diregarding of any real Christianity... oTL

I am such a bad person but I am so happy with so many people telling me they cried at that part... ;A; I was totally tearing up when I wrote it oTL

Yeah, I really wanted this story (esp the end) to be kind of vague so you can make of it whatever you want :) Glad you think that worked!!

Btw, I will gladly receive any fanart ypu might draw 8))) I am eagerly waiting for the one od Jaejoong and Jyuni ;u;

Aigooo crying Ro <3 I'm not sorry at all though! haha :'D

Thank you so much for reading, and for this insane comment!!!

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jaemono June 3 2013, 11:18:19 UTC
Omo, that audio comment..... .__. Let's forget about that OTL

One can really read nature is close and important to you! :) Your feelings really were translated by words! Yes, of course I feel like this, too. I've always felt like that, too!

Yes, even they deserve it, but why make you me feel so desperate for Jyuni. Aigoo... I really like - well, I don't like - but that you didn't make her comeback, because you really make her like an animal that way. :) I'm so happy she could fly ;-;

Your own angel is definitely special ;A; /cards fingers through Jaejoong's fluffy wings/

Hahahahaha you interrupting YunJae's moment because Jyuni was waiting on the other side of the door cracked me up so bad xDDD

I'm not sorry, poor Jyuni :"D

Omo, Jae would indeed be too old .___. Let's make him an ahjussi angel instead. LOL XD

Ohhh it is from that book! I thought my mind was playing a trick on me! That book ajskdfjd it made me tear up and then to know it's the truth.. ;___; Really, why are people such bastards...

Nope, I didn't find anything offensive. ^^ I was waiting for it though after learning Jae was an angel, because you stated so above the chapter, but I didn't think it was. :) I

I can imagine and easily believe you teared up writing this! ;A; When you write, everything is closer and slower because you're really in the story and then you alter this, you alter that, so you're really into the story, so I'd believe if you were crying to your heart's contents. :"D

Omo, if I will get so many muses and approval, I will ;A; I hope to finish it today, but his wings take me a while. :) Maybe tomorrow~~ :

Aigooo crying Ro <3 I'm not sorry at all though! haha :'D

-_____________- keep in mind that I love you, okay?

Insane comment was insane, but after all.... you made 3 posts so the comment will be longer, but okay, I didn't expect it to be this long. o_O

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