Omg I totally forgot that I had the first spot D: anyways, I'm sorry that it has taken me so long to write you a comment.. I didn't have the time to read at first and then when I finally did, Juhannus was in the middle and you know what happened so.. yeah XD sorry for rambling ;^; anyways I'm here now! :3 Onto the story
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Okay, first of all, sweet Eeca… Which part would be specifically adjective-abusing; because from the beginning to the end was actually perfect. I would really, really, really love to see what’s in your mind, for this story is already great, let alone what you think and see in your head! ;O; Please organize a trip for me~ Enjoyable is a meaning which is too low to label it! It was a heart wrenching story, it really captivated me and omo… you really made me end up in tears
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I totally loved the way you described Jaejoong’s eyes; as if it were wide pools of black, and as much as I like his eyes I like his wings. Beautiful elegant feathers… Such a sight has to be magnificent. The pulses of energy that fluid through them; that it’s like a heartbeat that the tremors are that constant, how did you come up with that? I am just… wooooosh my mind just leaves me, it’s just… You really left me in awe, with this and with this story in general!
Feather by feather, Yunho cleaned the shuddering wings. Their almost blinding whiteness uncovered gradually, making Yunho feel as if he was looking at something he shouldn’t be, something not meant for his eyes. I thought like that, too! ;A;
He arranged the yellow blanket around it and grabbed the closest water bowl, pulling it next to the box and lowering the bird near to it. He made sure it drank some before arranging it into the box comfortably, with the blanket around it but not too tight so that it could get out whenever it wanted.I might develop an obsession with
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And then the way Jyuni continued her way to Jaejoong after Yunho had put her down - almost killing her ;A; - and Jaejoong cradling her like that, oh my heart He could see it right from the front step, a lonely figure crawling on the ground towards him with a staggering seagull in tow.
With a simple sentence you turn me in a pool of sobbing feels! ;~~; /fifth tissue/ AISH WHO CARES WHICH ONE THIS IS, I used my blankets as tissues anyway! \ >~~~~~~~~< /
“There you are!” he exclaimed cheerily, disregarding of the rough, damp rock underneath his belly. Yunho reached him in a few seconds, crouching down, hooking his fingers under the boy’s armpits to hoist him up. The boy’s arms wound around his neck as he hummed contently. The seagull stopped crying, strutting around Yunho’s feet, pecking his bare toes curiously.*______________.* I want a movie, please make me a movie, Eeca. When you’re going back to Korea you will contact Jae’s and Yun’s agencies and you will write them a script and they will act in this, okay? Promise? Pinky promise
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Haha there were way too many adjectives right?? I think a lot of people will find the beginning really boring xD Anyways, I'm glad you liked it :'3 Thank you for reading ;-;
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i'm going to avoid embarrassing myself here so i'm gonna message you my feels...
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(the poor birds...)
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I totally loved the way you described Jaejoong’s eyes; as if it were wide pools of black, and as much as I like his eyes I like his wings. Beautiful elegant feathers… Such a sight has to be magnificent. The pulses of energy that fluid through them; that it’s like a heartbeat that the tremors are that constant, how did you come up with that? I am just… wooooosh my mind just leaves me, it’s just… You really left me in awe, with this and with this story in general!
Feather by feather, Yunho cleaned the shuddering wings. Their almost blinding whiteness uncovered gradually, making Yunho feel as if he was looking at something he shouldn’t be, something not meant for his eyes.
I thought like that, too! ;A;
He arranged the yellow blanket around it and grabbed the closest water bowl, pulling it next to the box and lowering the bird near to it. He made sure it drank some before arranging it into the box comfortably, with the blanket around it but not too tight so that it could get out whenever it wanted.I might develop an obsession with ( ... )
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With a simple sentence you turn me in a pool of sobbing feels! ;~~; /fifth tissue/ AISH WHO CARES WHICH ONE THIS IS, I used my blankets as tissues anyway! \ >~~~~~~~~< /
“There you are!” he exclaimed cheerily, disregarding of the rough, damp rock underneath his belly. Yunho reached him in a few seconds, crouching down, hooking his fingers under the boy’s armpits to hoist him up. The boy’s arms wound around his neck as he hummed contently. The seagull stopped crying, strutting around Yunho’s feet, pecking his bare toes curiously.*______________.* I want a movie, please make me a movie, Eeca. When you’re going back to Korea you will contact Jae’s and Yun’s agencies and you will write them a script and they will act in this, okay? Promise? Pinky promise ( ... )
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and hey, it was really well-written, even with the 'adjective-abuse' LOL ♥
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