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Hogwarts Too Exposed Chapter 2 part 2

szaleniec1000 Dec 01, 2011 00:11

In which underage girls prance around naked for the enjoyment of a crowd of adults and nobody, except any sensible reader, sees a problem with that.

( Hogwarts Too Exposed Chapter 2 continued )

vanity, soapbox, did not do the bloody research, wrong word dammit, conflict be damned, not simultaneous, department of redundancy department, expospeak, the nudist doth protest too much, anvil of foreshadowing, pov!fail, welsh railway, little miss impertinence, sentences are not minivans, priorities be damned, you call that pacing, americanisms in the potterverse, mary sue and gary stu, hermione in name only, nudity for everyone, harry potter, badfic:hogwarts too exposed, said bookism, continuity isn't optional, breast fixation, aoc does not work that way

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Dark Secrets: Intro and Chapter 1

szaleniec1000 May 01, 2010 02:35

Ron gets a raw deal in fanfic. Harry and Draco between them have shagged the entire cast several times over and over 9000 Mary Sues to boot, whereas Ron is lucky if he manages to get paired with his canon love interest. But it's worse than that. With Draco running around being all sparkly bishounen anti-hero like the Potterverse's answer to Edward ( Read more... )

vanity, ey up our tom, mary sue and gary stu, doubt your commitment to sparkle motion, badfic:dark secrets, harry potter, department of redundancy department, ron is evil

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