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szaleniec1000

Hogwarts Too Exposed Chapter 9 part 2

May 16, 2012 01:33

Here there be glurge. And also grimdark. Not at the same time, but I wouldn't put it past this author to try.
( Hogwarts Too Exposed Chapter 9 part 2 )

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tenkai_kujaku May 16 2012, 08:40:21 UTC

It just gets worse and worse, doesn't it?

szaleniec1000 May 16 2012, 15:12:20 UTC

That it does. More glurge, more pointless grimdark and yet another badass female character reduced to an ineffectual bystander.

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szaleniec1000 May 16 2012, 20:14:45 UTC

And the fact that I've seen more than one comment to the effect of "I used to like Hogwarts Exposed but don't any more" testifies to that.

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szaleniec1000 May 17 2012, 13:13:31 UTC

It says a lot about the internet that I got that reference even though I've still not got round to playing Skyrim.

I used to like Hogwarts Exposed. Then I took a Cruciatus curse in the knee.

Now I'd like to see a Harry Potter parody where the Cruciatus curse works by beaming badfic into its victims' heads.

sith_droideka May 17 2012, 19:43:28 UTC

Maybe that's what happens, but Harry never could describe it.

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